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since: 04-05-06, id: 1021907
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Author has written 14 stories for Harry Potter, Baldur's Gate, and Buffy: The Vampire Slayer.
β : LionofPerth is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
As a person is both a fanfic writer and attempting to be an author I try to write my fanfics as I would my works of fiction. I hold my self to high standards, not only in spelling, but punctuation, grammar and spacing. If it's not spaced properly it's just as bad as a poorly spelt story.

If you would like me to consider betareading please do/consider the following.

1. When you look at it, have a look at my fics and see how they are spaced and set out, please try to do something similar as it makes reading so much easier allowing me to locate anything I feel is incorrect, or should be changed.

2. I will be honest, if I think you are going down the completely wrong path for a story I will say so. I will not be using a 'softly softly' approach. I will be honest, and if you think I am being mean, think again, editors and publisher's are far harsher than I ever will be.

3. Ideas, if I feel you should take an idea in a different way I am not saying you can't make it work, I am trying to make sure you make the best possible story you can, and the best way you can do that is do something new and unexpected.

4. Do your research, understand that with the war games I write I read alot of military and espionage related material. If you want to ask for an idea, or how I feel something should work, then I will answer it as best I can, however, if you write something and I feel you have it completely wrong, I will make sure you know about it.

5. Finally, have an open mind, I write alot, it's what I love to do, and I have plenty of ideas waiting to be unleased. If you really want help, ask nicely and I'll try my hardest, if you want someone to just say 'yes' you've come to the wrong person.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I'm pretty good at noticing most errors in spelling and grammar, however the occasional one would pass by.

Characterisation and scene building tend to be some of the things I notice pretty quickly, if I feel something more can be done I will point it out.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Form... if it's not neat then I can't stand it, and will not beta it. If you want me to read it make sure there are clear spaces between paragraphs, dialouge is on seperate lines and breaks are clear.

I will not notice everything.
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
Sci fi/fantasy mainly, in addition, with my knowledge of a moderate ammount of military history as well as doctrine I can help you in ways most authors can't.

Shows such as Firefly, Buffy, Angel, Battlestar Galactica (new), Farscape, Stargate Sg1 and Stargate Atlantis would be good examples.
Game wise, D&D, Baldur's Gate series, Icewind Dale series, Planescape Torment,
Book wise: HP only pretty much.

In terms of ships I don't care as long as it's not one of the ones mentioned below. If it's done well I will read it, Dark!Harry, Light!Harry, or Grey!Harry, I don't care, if it's done well it's worth trying.

I will say this, if it's creative, and it has a fundamentally new idea to it, then I'll give it a go.
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
The following I will not touch with a barge pole:
SLASH and MPREG (both are wrong on so many levels. I don't care if I person is gay, that's there business... but the slash is just 'shudders'
Harry/Snape in any form.
Harry/MM, I mean ick.
Harry/MW even worse.
Harry/Draco, why I ask you, why do you even like the snotty nosed brat?
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Game » Advent Rising
Cartoon » Aeon Flux
Anime » Akira
Tv » Angel
Game » Assassin's Creed
Game » Baldur's Gate
Tv » Battlestar Galactica: 2003
Game » Battlezone
Movie » Blade
Movie » Blade Runner
Movie » Bourne Identity/Supremacy
Movie » Brotherhood of the Wolf
Anime » Bubblegum Crisis
Tv » Buffy: The Vampire Slayer
Tv » Burn Notice
Anime » Castle in the Sky
Game » Command & Conquer
Game » Conker's Bad Fur Day
Book » Count of Monte Cristo
Anime » Cowboy Bebop
Movie » Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon
Tv » Dark Angel
Game » Dead Space
Game » Deus Ex
Game » Devil May Cry
Movie » Donnie Darko
Game » Dungeons and Dragons
Tv » Farscape
Movie » Fast and the Furious
Movie » Fifth Element
Tv » Firefly
Game » Gears of War
Anime » Ghost in the Shell
Movie » Gladiator
Anime » Gunslinger Girl
Game » Halo
Book » Harry Potter
Game » Homeworld
Movie » House of Flying Daggers
Game » Icewind Dale
Movie » Indiana Jones
Game » Jade Empire
Anime » Last Exile
Game » Legend of Zelda
Movie » Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels
Game » Lost Planet
Game » Mass Effect
Game » Metroid
Movie » Minority Report
Tv » Ocean Girl
Game » Perfect Dark
Movie » Pitch Black / Riddick
Anime » Princess Mononoke
Game » Psychonauts
Movie » Pulp Fiction
Game » Resident Evil
Book » Robert Heinlein
Anime » Robotech/Macross
Anime » Samurai Champloo
Tv » SeaQuest
Game » Shadowrun
Cartoon » Skyland
Tv » Sliders
Tv » Space: Above and Beyond
Game » Splinter Cell
Movie » Star Wars
Tv » Stargate: Atlantis
Tv » Stargate: SG-1
Game » Tomb Raider
Game » Warhammer
Comic » Watchmen
Game » World of Darkness
Anime » Zoids
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Drama
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Parody
Supernatural
Suspense
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
Spiritual
Crime
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship
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