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since: 05-28-06, id: 1055240
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Author has written 21 stories for Dragon Ball Z, and Harry Potter.
β : MetalCloud is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
As a beta-reader, I expect you to have at least reviewed your story before you send it to me. Also, I would like you to not to get insulted at any of my suggestions - you asked for help. I will try to betaread as fast as I can, but obviously, sometimes Real Life will have to take precedence.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I have an instinctive grasp of grammar, punctuation and spelling. I can also rearrange sentences, or suggest different ways of wording things to make it more effective. Also, I'm English, so (as I mainly work in the Potterverse) I can help with any BritSpeak.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I will sometimes rewrite a sentence instead of commenting, but I will mark my adjustments in red. I'll indicate what I've changed and ask for opinions.
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
I like Snape&Harry, Lupin&Harry, Sirius&Harry gen stories. Really, I like Harry getting some sort of family. I'm a big slash fan too.
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
Really, I'll give most stories a go - I should say, though, I don't particularly like OC's, especially if they're one of the main characters. Oh, and I don't really like Manipulative!Dumbledore either.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Movie » Batman Begins/Dark Knight
Anime » Dragon Ball Z
Book » Harry Potter
Book » Lord of the Rings
Cartoon » Teen Titans
Book » Twilight
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Humor
Drama
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Parody
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Fantasy
Tragedy
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship
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