Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
well i'm not exactly one to make a profile like this, but i love to talk. lol. as of today, my mom is no longer my mom, because she has destroyed my life long enough. my parents have been divorced for almost ten years and out of those ten years, my 'mom' has gone through three husbands and failed at all those relationships. i don't get her. |
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
i'm like a math wiz. so much fun. i don't care if i'm supposed to writing about my strength in writing but i wanted to say that if people need help in math. i'm quite good in grammer until i go and proof read things. i kinda think i suck at that. the easiest thing to get right is when to say 'well' or 'good'. |
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
i'm terrible at knowing when to put semicolons or commons and things like that. |
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
blah blah blah... |
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
Was It That Important?
Lindsey Wolff
You took off again
Leaving him like all the rest
You took off
Knowing you have children
What will you do?
What have you said?
It’s different in the end
You lost your cool
I lost my head
That’s all I need to know
You fought the cold
While I fought the snow
I watched the tears run down your face
You said, “No.”
And my mind went crazy again
Now it’s over
I took your place on the street
It’s my turn to freeze at night
I never thought I’d say, “Goodbye”
That’s when you left again
My eyes filled by dotted lines
Of water waiting
To try the slide down pale cheeks
I saw it coming
You were never reliable
You destroyed my hopes and dreams
I crashed on the bench that night
It all took me by surprise
I thought this was the end
What happened to my best friend?
Did she leave because of him,
Or because she was happier with that other man?
Did she forget about her baby girl?
She used to be her entire world
Did she think it over in time?
The little girl lost her sweet smile
Will we ever see it again?
Will she ever go back to him?
I never knew her to be so cruel
We all turn blue
Turned the darkest blue
She sits there contemplating
The darkest things to do
He never saw it coming
He took her and led her on home
That’s when she knew he was gone
She’s never going back again
She nothing but a teenage queen
Dramatic to the very end |