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since: 07-19-06, id: 1094484
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Author has written 7 stories for Naruto, and Kingdom Hearts.
β : Fye Kurokawa is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Who I am as a beta-reader, huh? Well, I don't really know yet. I can only say that when I read a story, I try to do my best to give an accurate description of what the story's like from my point of view. I do the best I can to give a repport on the style, the grammar(because we ALL know a story's not worth reading if you CAN'T read it!), the storyline and, most of all, the feelings transposed into the story.
I can't always describe EVERYTHING, just like sometimes, I might offend.
NEVER intentionally, I promise!
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I'm actually a moderately fast reader; I like to imagine each voice, every feature, and every tone while I read, which makes me a little slower than fast. I also do that while I write--I try to convey the intonation in the voices in writing. Which isn't always an easy thing.
When I'm really into a story, I can often read a few thousand words in a few hours, and easily finish a 100k word story in four days(depending on the amount of work I have to do at home as well).
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
When I'm bored with a story, I often give it up and forget all about it, to the point where I never even so much as give a second thought. I have a lot of icomplete stories in that fashion, really, but I try to pick them up where I left as much as possible.
Same goes for reading; sometimes I get bored and forget all about what I read, though most of the time I try to read to the end. Also, I can't go on without mentionning the fact that I sometimes can't afford to keep up with chapters as soon as they're published, which makes me late in reading, which causes me to lose interest. Because reading three chapters in a jolt really isn't healthy, and although I know that, it's always what I'm tempted to do.
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
I would really prefer reading anime fanfictions and things based on fantasy series, such as the 10th Kingdom, Naruto, The Cat Returns, etc. I also like stories with a plot that diverges from the original story, something completely different from whatever you're writing from, to the point where the original series is lost in your own story.
In brief, this means that stories MUST be original, as much as possible. Clichés like "ZOMG she switchededed worldz mannnnnn" aren't really my forte.

Fanfictions based off of literature are also accepted with WIDE open arms! Though, again, mostly fantastic stories are what I read, such as Eragon or even Tahn(a christian novel, not very popular, I might add). Stories written by authors such as Agatha Christie aren't what I usually read, let alone appreciate...
Sometimes, if the story is suspenseful enough, I'll be tempted to read to the end just to quench the curiosity that drove me to begin with.
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
Crime stories, the kind where the girl gets killed and this woman tries to solve the murder while the men around her keep on judging, but one of them in secretly in love and all that jazz. It's predictable, it's too realistic, and I find it overall boring. There's not much place to the imagination, which, once again, is "not my cup of tea". And by the way, I prefer coffee. C:

An other thing I don't enjoy is LACK OF DETAIL. Mostly concerning the characters. I don'T very much enjoy not being able to picture the characters and their actions. The places are a must, too, seeing as I can't imagine someone doing something in a place I can't even see, or don't even know all that well.

An OTHER thing: long, LONNNNNNG stories that would take you four years to write, and almost equally as long to read. I never really read anything above the 150k word marker, and even then, I was rushing in the last chapters to know what happened in the end.
To find out that the story wasn'Tteven complete.
DECEPTION.

Last thing I should mention is the fact that I'm not a fan of stories that turn around what they call Mary-Sues, Original Characters that are, altogether, just TOO perfect. That fit in every way in the series you've placed them in, that just suddenly come out of the background to claim the limelight.
Noooo.
I like characters that are REAL, that have REAL problems and that live REAL lives, close to the 'audience', in this case, the readers. You know, things that hit close to home, that attrack the sympathy without having people realise what a blantant display of pitty-attraction it is.

THAT...
Or should I say THIS ALL.
Is not my cup of tea. C:
Beta Preferences
Language: French
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Tv » 10th Kingdom
Cartoon » 6teen
Anime » Ai Yori Aoshi
Anime » Alice 19th
Book » Alice in Wonderland
Movie » American Pie
Game » Animal Crossing
Anime » Avatar: Last Airbender
Anime » Azumanga Daioh
Movie » Balto
Cartoon » Batman
Movie » Batman Begins
Movie » Battle Royale
Game » Beyond Good & Evil
Anime » Bleach
Book » Blood And Chocolate
Anime » Blood+
Tv » Bones
Cartoon » Boondocks
Movie » Bride and Prejudice
Book » Bridge to Terabithia
Book » C. S. Lewis
Anime » Card Captor Sakura
Anime » Castle in the Sky
Anime » Cat Returns
Anime » Chobits
Anime » Chrno Crusade
Cartoon » Class of the Titans
Tv » Cold Case
Book » Count of Monte Cristo
Anime » Cowboy Bebop
Anime » D N Angel
Book » Da Vinci Code
Game » Dance Dance Revolution
Cartoon » Danny Phantom
Tv » Dark Angel
Movie » Day After Tomorrow
Game » Dead or Alive
Anime » Death Note
Cartoon » Delilah and Julius
Book » Devil Wears Prada
Anime » Digimon
Book » Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde
Movie » Dragon Heart
Anime » Elfen Lied
Book » Eragon
Anime » Escaflowne
Anime » Eureka Seven
Book » Fairy Tales
Movie » Fast and the Furious
Game » Final Fantasy X-2
Game » Final Fantasy: Crystal Chronicles
Tv » Friends
Anime » Fullmetal Alchemist
Movie » Gattaca
Anime » Ghost in the Shell
Book » Golden Compass/Northern Lights
Game » Grand Theft Auto
Anime » Gravitation
Movie » Grease
Anime » Gundam Seed
Anime » hack/SIGN
Anime » Haibane Renmei
Anime » Hamtaro
Book » Harry Potter
Game » Harvest Moon
Cartoon » Hey Arnold
Movie » Hidalgo
Game » Hotel Dusk: Room 215
Anime » Howl's Moving Castle
Book » I Am Legend
Tv » iCarly
Anime » Ichigo 100%
Anime » Inuyasha
Cartoon » Jane and the Dragon
Tv » Joan Of Arcadia
Anime » Kamisama Kazoku
Cartoon » Kim Possible
Movie » King Arthur
Game » Kingdom Hearts
Anime » Kyou Kara Maou
Movie » Last Samurai
Movie » Little Mermaid
Book » Lord of the Rings
Anime » Love Hina
Anime » Loveless
Anime » Lucky Star
Anime » Mai HiME
Cartoon » Martin Mystery
Movie » Matrix
Anime » Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya
Book » Memoirs of a Geisha
Movie » Men In Black
Cartoon » Mulan
Anime » Naruto
Anime » Nausicaa of the Valley of the Wind
Tv » Navy NCIS
Anime » Noir
Anime » One Piece
Anime » Ouran High School Host Club
Book » Peter Pan
Book » Phantom of the Opera
Movie » Pirates of the Caribbean
Anime » Princess Ai
Anime » Princess Mononoke
Tv » Radio Free Roscoe
Anime » RahXephon
Cartoon » Recess
Book » Redwall
Cartoon » Rugrats
Anime » Sailor Moon
Anime » Samurai Champloo
Anime » Scrapped Princess
Game » Soul Caliber
Anime » Spirited Away
Cartoon » Storm Hawks
Anime » Strawberry Panic!
Tv » Sue Thomas:FB Eye
Game » Tales of Phantasia
Game » Tales of Symphonia
Cartoon » Teen Titans
Tv » That 70's show
Tv » That's So Raven
Cartoon » Totally Spies
Anime » Tsubasa Chronicle
Movie » Van Helsing
Anime » Video Girl Ai
Cartoon » W.I.T.C.H.
Tv » Will and Grace
Anime » Witch Hunter Robin
Anime » Wolf's Rain
Cartoon » X-Men: Evolution
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
Romance
Humor
Drama
Mystery
Angst
Suspense
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