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since: 03-20-07, id: 1242532
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Author has written 5 stories for Xiaolin Showdown, Clique, Storm Hawks, and Outsiders.
β : Chocolate Unicorn is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Okay! As a "Beta-Reader" i am very critical. i could find a flaw in about almost anything in front of me; a picture, a story, or even a performance. Sad, i know. it makes it very hard to like many things but i am getting better at this. I would be happy to give you advice on your story, or help you with your writing style. Though my stories are still rather immature, i can still help YOU. My betareading style.....ummm left to right? JUST KIDDING! Whne i read a a story i look to see if there is detail, build up, and that it doesn't go by to quickly. For example; if you have an OC in your story or a new love interest between existing characters, i don't want to see them automatically love each other if it wasn't there to begin with. I want to see the mutual (sp?) attraction build. My only wish is that you do read at least one of my stories and give me one review telling me what you think. Thank you!
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
Reading stenght- I actually read and try to see the characters, i get into good stories, and..... know what i'm reading
Writing strenght- I love details, i love writing, and imagining stuff
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Reading- i don't have a lot of time during fall, winter, and spring to read
Writing- Spelling, punctuations, and grammar
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
I love the stories that have Oc's but not the overbearing mary sue OC's or when the other characters aren't the same and don't act as they should towards the Oc. But i can tolerate them. I LOVE OC's >.
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
Slashes! i'm sorry but i don't like them. There are some that i have read (1) and actually was like....OHHHHHHH kay. But i just don't like them sorry.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » T
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Cartoon » American Dragon: Jake Long
Cartoon » Avatar: Last Airbender
Book » Harry Potter
Comic » Justice League
Cartoon » Kim Possible
Book » Mortal Instruments
Book » Outsiders
Cartoon » Storm Hawks
Cartoon » Teen Titans
Book » Twilight
Cartoon » Xiaolin Showdown
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Adventure
Mystery
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
Tragedy
Crime
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship
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