Tonzura123's Beta Reader Profile

Tonzura123 's Beta Reader Profile

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Author has written 15 stories for Chronicles of Narnia, and Merlin.

Tonzura123 is a registered beta reader but is currently not accepting beta reading requests: on hiatus/vacation.

Tonzura123's has left a hiatus/vacation message:

Buried in course work. Please leave a message after the tone.

Beta Description

Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader

I'll tell you what I think, try to assist you to where you're heading with the story, offer advice, and I'll make sure I'm not making you write in a way that isn't your style. I look for grammatical correctness, the flow of the story (or lack thereof), spelling, and description, among other things. I'm well on my way towards a degree in English, staff member of "The Seahawk," and a well-established writer on FF dot net.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths

Flow. Vocabulary. Description. Allusions. Foreshadowing. Character creation and description. Inserting themes into the plot. Grammar. Spelling. I'm an English major with a 3.9 GPA. I'm going to write novels and teach college courses in English. English is my sort of gig.

My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses

I can miss little things when I get wrapped up in the plot of a story. But rest assured that the story will be read, re-read, and read yet again in search of them! Other weaknesses include: descriptions of mental thought processes and a cramped personal schedule.

Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others

One-shots and opening chapters that need a little kick.

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Beta Preferences

Language: English

Content Rating: Fiction K » T

Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for

Book » Chronicles of Narnia

Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for

General
Humor
Drama
Poetry
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Fantasy
Spiritual
Tragedy
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship

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