I'm honest and I will be brutally honest if need be. If your fic sounds rushed, choppy, and includes poor grammar, I will tell you. Don't expect sugarcoating. However, I will also point out your strengths and help you expand on them.

Sentence structure and flow are two things I get many compliments about. Placing events and scenes together so they flow smoothly and comfortably is something I can do well. I can place humor within a story so that it compliments the plot and not overwhelm it. Sexual scenes and heterosexual romance also pose me little difficulty. I've been married for over seven years. Trust me, I know what's realistic or utterly stupid when sex is involved.

I'm not perfect, and often times have trouble creating a fitting end to a chaptered work.

I do love a good lemon. Also, anything lighthearted and super-fluffy fics would be great. If you're writing humor, send it my way.

Uber-angst, yaoi/yuri, or any sex scene that involves more than two people. Call me conservative. If your fic involves character-bashing, leave me out of it.

Game » Final Fantasy VII

Romance Humor

Parody Supernatural

Spiritual Family

Friendship