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Aeralyse 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 11-28-07, id: 1432626
Author has written 8 stories for Pirates of the Caribbean, Fullmetal Alchemist, Legend of Zelda, and Liberty's Kids.
β : Aeralyse is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I've taken a long break for writing fanfiction. A two-year plus break. The stories in my profile are old, poorly-written, and make me cringe - but I've left them up to motivate myself to improve. During my extended haitus, I'd spent a lot of time writing academic non-fiction (in other words, schoolwork) and articles for my university's newspaper, where I learned better writing and have been able to practice editing. Interested writers should know that I generally don't mince words and probably will be brutal when editing a story. And since I'm in the habit (see explanation in box below), I will ask to look over the new revision.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
Strengths? I'm a journalism major, so editing is basically second nature: my strengths lie in facts, style (grammar and format) and whether the point was conveyed concisely in a manner that flowed well. Incorrect punctuation can be corrected, but I see no point in useless words that only serve to discourage the reader from continuing. I'm good at pointing out what areas need clarification or are strong in the story.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I'm a college student, and one of our biggest weaknesses is procrastination. But give me a deadline, and a lot of the problem has been eliminated. Another weakness is character development, or sometimes a lack of vision, especially when reading someone else's work. If you have no vision for your story, I can point you in a direction, but in the end, I can only help so much.
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
I would prefer to beta works within a fandom with which I am familiar. I like stories where love - or the endurance of it - is a prominent aspect of the story. Drama, humour, and family are also fine, whereas action in writing tends to bore me a bit. My main preference is that the pairing (if one is featured) is one that I support or am neutral towards. Oneshots are also preferred, something with which I can sit down and work on for an afternoon and then be done.
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
I'm not into any sort of slash - yuri or yaoi. And while I can read het-pairing lemons, I cannot write them, so editing will be minimal and limited to mechanics.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » T
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Book » American Girl
Movie » Beauty and the Beast
Book » Bible
Anime » Black Cat
Anime » Bleach
Anime » Castle in the Sky
Book » Chronicles of Narnia
Anime » Darker than BLACK
Anime » Death Note
Cartoon » Emperor's New Groove
Game » Final Fantasy VII
Anime » Fruits Basket
Anime » Fullmetal Alchemist
Anime » Howl's Moving Castle
Anime » Kuroshitsuji
Game » Legend of Zelda
Cartoon » Liberty's Kids
Movie » Mulan
Anime » Ouran High School Host Club
Movie » Pirates of the Caribbean
Movie » Princess and the Frog
Anime » Rurouni Kenshin
Movie » Sleeping Beauty
Anime » Spiral
Anime » Spirited Away
Game » Super Smash Brothers
Movie » Toy Story
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Adventure
Angst
Fantasy
Tragedy
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship
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