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since: 02-05-08, id: 1492883
Author has written 8 stories for Super Smash Brothers.
Byoshi is a registered beta reader but is currently not accepting beta reading requests: on hiatus/vacation.
Byoshi's has left a hiatus/vacation message:
Currently writing my own sad fics.

~Byoshi
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Right, let's see. 10000 characters to explain my way of betareading. Not that I need that much:br /



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First off, I'm a serious writer. That doesn't mean I don't read or approve of humour; I mean that I will only beta-read fics that can actually be distinguished as fics that the author has put time and effort into. A lot of 'writers' out there write without running a simple spellcheck or even thinking about what they are going to write about. I want to have my eyesight in tact after I've beta read. Don't blind me with chatspeak, hideous grammar or gigantic paragraphs of doom.br /



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I wouldn't say I'm a harsh beta-reader, but I will quite openly say what I don't like about your fic. However, I will always suggest ways for you to improve on those parts; I also make it part of my routine to tell you what I do like of your fic. I think a fair balance of praise and criticism is what makes a good beta reader. I can be nice, I swear.br /



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If you want me to beta read for you, please send me a PM and I'll let you know my email address so that you can send your document to me. This is so that I can avoid using docX because it hates me.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
Grammar. I've got plenty of understanding of grammar. Working in a law firm, catching mistakes and using the English language has to be second nature. I will quite happily point out grammatical errors and correct them for you. I totally love grammar. br /



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General feel for a fic. Description and good dialogue is a must for multichapter fics, and I look out for these when I write my own works. I'm very thorough when it comes to analysing the general feel of a fic. Again, I will suggest alternative ways for you to go if there is something glaring about the fic that isn't particularly good. For example, if I think parts are too choppy or rushed, then I will point this out for you and give suggestions.br /



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I'm very good with angst. I write depressing/angsty fics myself (what? I'm a Mewtwo writer, what do you expect? :P) so if your fic is a serious one with dark undertones, chances are I will work better with it.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Heh heh, weaknesses. br /



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I cannot come up with amazing plotlines for your fic. I struggle with that myself, so if you want me to beta-read, make sure you have your own plot ready, or at least a general direction you want your fic to go in.br /



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Also, erm...I'm not a very funny person. I can't come up with funny jokes or LOL situations if my life depended on it. I suggest looking for another beta if your fic is centrally humour.
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
Romance and drama. I can beta multichapter or one shots (just let me do the former in short bursts, ne?) for you.
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
Yaoi and yuri. I won't beta read fics that have those pairings. And again, I don't do well with humour, so skip that too. I also don't do poetry (because I fail at it), and I pretty much abhor songfics, so don't send one along my way.
Beta Preferences
Language: Japanese
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Game » Super Smash Brothers
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Drama
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
Tragedy
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship
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