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since: 12-08-02, id: 307035
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Author has written 22 stories for Harry Potter, Bible, Hellsing, and A song of Ice and Fire.
β : Lavinia Lavender is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Hi - I'm currently in my senior year of college, majoring in Creative Writing with a minor in Literature. I've been betaing since early high school, and I've always had a passion for nitpicky English. I also have a fetish for British English, and while I'm not as perfect as a native British person, I know a lot of the spellings and slang. I've always loved reading, and that's how I've acquired most of my English skills.

I will be somewhat blunt betaing your stories - I'll tell you what's wrong, though not in excessively harsh terms. I also try to always find something to compliment you and let you know what you're doing right.

You can message AJ Seawiel and random_musing for a reference as to how I beta.

I do expect a note in the author notes of a chapter/story crediting me as beta. And no, I do not ever guarantee 100% perfection.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
English mechanics (spelling, grammar, punctuation); general style, cutting down unnecessary words, story flow, believable characterization (for characters/fandoms with which I'm familiar). In my writing, I'm especially good with dialogue.

I can focus on whatever you want to, though it will cause me pain to ignore mechanical issues.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I can't always explain why a certain word is the right one. As a writer, my biggest challenge is adequate and original descriptions in narration.
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
For Hellsing: Integra/Alucard, Integra-centric (especially the teenage years), or stories centered on Integra and Walter's (platonic) relationship.

Harry Potter: I can do anything, but my OTP is Lily/Severus; I also like Minerva (and Minerva/Tom) and Remus-centric stories.

Ouran: Kyouya-centric, Tamaki/Haruhi (or anything about either of those characters); Mori and Kaoru are also awesome.

A Song of Ice and Fire: I wouldn't want to beta some of the hardcore scenes Martin writes (especially the gory/tragic massacre or torture ones; graphic sex is fine, though), though I'm not entirely a wimp. My favorite characters (therefore the ones I'd feel the most comfortable critiquing) are: Daenerys, Arya, and alive!Catelyn. I can probably handle any other fairly major character, but don't expect me to know a ton of minor characters or houses.
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
Nothing heavily gory or disturbing.

For Hellsing: anything heavily featuring Seras, Iscariot, or Millenium, or shipping Integra with anyone but Alucard. Anything where Integra or Walter die/something terrible happens to one of them without a happy ending. Sorry, I'm sensitive.

Ouran: Nothing dark, and no Kyouya/Renge, please (unless it's fairly light and not the focus of the story). I'm not too fond of Honey shipped with anyone.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Book » A song of Ice and Fire
Book » Harry Potter
Anime » Hellsing
Anime » Ouran High School Host Club
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Adventure
Parody
Angst
Suspense
Fantasy
Tragedy
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship
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