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since: 03-04-03, id: 351719
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Author has written 27 stories for Yu Yu Hakusho, Fire Emblem, Legend of Zelda, Final Fantasy VII, The Day The Earth Stood Still, Equilibrium, and Final Fantasy: Tactics.
β : Silvara is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
HOTE: Sorry for this ridicuous spacing. The code is going crazy since years now, and looks like I can't do anything about it.



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- I generally answer / edit text quickly. br /



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- I'll only beta one or two chapter at a time. br /



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- I love to debate and speculate about a fandom on various domains. I easily rant thousand words PMs that way. I'll prefer to let you know if a story doesn't interest me instead of postponing it again and again.br /



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Just Respect God. By your words just as in your texts. That's not optional. Thank you.br /



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Ma Bio :br /



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- In English or en français. Franglais carrément? No problème. ^^br /



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- Je réponds assez rapidement (sous réserve de très rares exceptions).br /



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- Traitons un ou deux chapitres à la fois maximum, plz.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
- Characterisationbr /



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- Logicbr /



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- Romance, friendship.br /



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- Spelling, Vocabulary, smoothness of the narration.br /



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- Overall harmony between the first to the last chapter.br /



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- SF: Computer techy stuff.br /



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- L'orthographe, la grammaire et les figures de style, br /



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- L'équilibre et sonorités de la syntaxe en français.La crédibilité des personnages, br /



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La logique du scénario, la poésie de son rythme, l'harmonie significative entre son introduction et sa conclusion.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
- English grammar and syntaxbr /



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- Action driven narration (I'm still noob there)br /



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- Kids characterizationbr /



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- For long stories (10'000 words or more), if I don't like the plot, I am prone to lost interestbr /



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- I can't portray very feminine characters
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
- That you already know what a self-insert or Mary Sue is. Because first thing I'll do is get ridden of these characters.br /



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- Romance conscientiously crafted and powered on complicity, pride or competitionbr /



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- Bromance, all kinds of orignal mostly platonic loves. But bromance does NOT mean neither slash, yaoi nor yuri; and that's precisely the most cool thing about it. br /



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- Pride & prejudice driven plotsbr /



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- Philosophic plotsbr /



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- Character portraying and development
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
- Clichéd characters can be remedied. A dull narration can be twisted. But if the plot itself is cliché, just drop the whole thing already and start anew!br /



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- If the story is long and describe the characters' everyday's life: no no.br /



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- I can't do lemons in general. Too shy - I dunno. But I do beta limes if they really add something important to the plot. br /



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- No undeads, vampires and other cuties of the kind.br /



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- No slash, or glorification of adultery.br /



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- No self-inserts, except in parodies, for auto-derision purposes.br /



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- Mangas: shojo and shonen bore me.br /



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- No insertion of asian words and costums in occidental settings.br /



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- Nothing reffering to christianism beliefs, least you're a christian yourself. br /



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Je ne fais pas de prélecture pour :br /



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- Les romances surfaitesbr /



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- Pas de scénarios classique s'il n'innove absolument en rienbr /



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- Pas de shojo ni shonen. Trop clichés, trop ennuyeux.br /



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- Pas de mélange des culture japonaise et occidentale.
Beta Preferences
Language: English and French
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Movie » Astro Boy
Movie » Equilibrium
Book » Foundation
Movie » I, Robot
Game » Legend of Zelda
Book » Little Prince
Movie » Osmosis Jones
Movie » Planet of the Apes
Movie » Short Circuit
Movie » The Day The Earth Stood Still
Movie » Tron
Movie » WALL-E
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
Romance
Humor
Drama
Poetry
Mystery
Parody
Suspense
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
Tragedy
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship
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