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since: 06-06-03, id: 397219
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Author has written 7 stories for Naruto, Bleach, Ouran High School Host Club, xxxHOLiC, and Ghost Hunt.
Hikagi is a registered beta reader but is currently not accepting beta reading requests: on hiatus/vacation.
Hikagi's has left a hiatus/vacation message:
Am busy preparing for a solo recital. Will be accepting requests after the 17th of April.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
The vast majority of my editing is done while I read. I like to voice out my thoughts as I go so that people know what my thought process is and what another person might interpret a sentence as, especially if it's different than what the author might have intended in the first place.

I mainly do quick flash edits and fix small mistakes here and there - a lot of small spelling or grammar-related stuff. I *can* offer advice for bigger issues, but that's not something I am especially good at. You'd probably do better to ask someone else if that is the case.

As for information about me: I am left-brained. This means that (for the most part) I am more logical than intuitive, am more objective than subjective, and like things to go in order. Basically speaking, I'm better at pointing out how going from Point A to Point B does not work because the transition is rough, rather than commenting on the effectiveness of the tone or a particular character's description.

I have pretty high expectations - mostly because I've only really beta'd for a few of my friends, said friends are accomplished writers (you can blame them for spoiling me), and blatant disregard for grammar/spelling rules makes me upset.

Uh, this one might be obvious, but I don't like to beta for fandoms I am not familiar/comfortable with. Some of the categories listed below are a bit if-y, especially when dealing with the majority of the minor characters involved. A few are listed only because I've completed them and have a very basic and general knowledge of how that particular world works - so don't expect me to be accurate on all the details or random trivial information. Also, there are some series where I am familiar with only the manga version instead of the anime, and vice versa.

Just to be on the safe side, please ask first, and then I will say whether or not I would be inclined to beta. This depends heavily on how big of a workload I have for that particular week.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I've found that inconsistent tenses are fairly noticeable and layout issues such as spacing, quotation marks going the wrong way (etc.), are easy to see. I can also find repeated words within close proximity, even if they are not in the same paragraph (within reason).


A friend of mine once described me as being "predictably unpredictable" because my brain comes up with crazy ideas every once in a while. XD
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I definitely need a lot of work with context-related issues. There are many places in my own writings that are choppy because of awkward word choices or sentence structures. I pay less attention to actual characterizations or imagery than I do with events and plot/sequences; then again, I am very bad at picking out inconsistencies *within* plot, unless the mistakes are glaring. I also have a bad habit of making people sound shallow (especially between character interactions) unless I am actively trying not to do so. Sometimes I focus on or obsess over a small detail to the extent that I neglect major issues that should have been addressed instead.

I have a really hard time keeping canon facts, information, and timelines straight.

Categories/things I am not proficient at: fight scenes, romance/fluff, long stories with complicated plot, word choices, flow-y language, setting descriptions, intonation, and more.

Unless there is a deadline, I am also a chronic procrastinator.
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
I like things with twists, especially if the reader doesn't expect them in the first place. (This is not strictly necessary.) Category-wise, I don't have a real preference - just as long as they're not part of the genres that I tend to avoid. Even if the stories are in a genre I normally don't like, I am usually willing to beta - within reason.

Of course, I appreciate just about anything that is thought out and well-written. I also prefer if the stories are one-shots or if the chapters are complete, because then I won't be left hanging on call to finish the job. It's very difficult for me to edit paragraph by paragraph since I like to go over the story's progression after I do my initial first-impression edit.

I like time-travel fics.

I love crossovers - it makes me very happy when I find plausible connections between two worlds that weren't actually meant to be put together in the same universe. "Plausible" was probably the most important word in that entire sentence.
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
I don't like to beta: Gushy romance. Parody. Corny/silly humor without a point. Crack!fics (unless they are extremely well-written). Yaoi. Anything explicit, lemon-y, lime-y, etc. Character bashing. Super-powered-beyond-belief characters. Self inserts. Original characters being the only and main focus (unless it is to shed light on a situation in a highly creative way). What-the-heck-is-going-on-this-story-has-no-point pieces.

There are times and places for these categories, but sadly they are not with me. I have a hard time appreciating the butchering or bashing of a character's personality for the sake of humor.

Most of all, things have to *make sense*. I don't like it when improbable things happen or authors decide to randomly combine characters and attempt at making a story that has no point.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Movie » A.I.
Cartoon » Aladdin
Misc » Anime X-overs
Book » Artemis fowl
Movie » Balto
Anime » Black Blood Brothers
Anime » Black Cat
Anime » Bleach
Misc » Book X-overs
Book » C. S. Lewis
Anime » Card Captor Sakura
Anime » Castle in the Sky
Movie » Chocolat
Anime » Claymore
Anime » Code Geass
Anime » Cowboy Bebop
Movie » Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon
Anime » D.Gray-Man
Anime » Darker than BLACK
Anime » Death Note
Anime » Detective Conan/Case Closed
Book » Diana Wynne Jones
Anime » Ergo Proxy
Anime » Escaflowne
Misc » Final Fantasy X-overs
Movie » Final Fantasy: Spirits Within
Cartoon » Finding Nemo
Anime » Flame of Recca
Anime » Fullmetal Alchemist
Anime » Get Backers
Anime » Ghost Hunt
Book » Giver
Anime » Gundam Seed
Anime » Gungrave
Anime » hack/SIGN
Book » Harry Potter
Anime » Heroic Age
Anime » Howl's Moving Castle
Anime » Hunter X Hunter
Movie » Incredibles
Movie » Joseph: King of Dreams
Anime » Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Game » Kingdom Hearts
Book » Left Behind
Movie » Lion King
Movie » Little Mermaid
Book » Lord of the Rings
Anime » Mai HiME
Anime » MÄR
Anime » Matantei Loki Ragnarok
Movie » Matrix
Movie » Meet the Robinsons
Anime » Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya
Cartoon » Mulan
Anime » Mushishi
Anime » Naruto
Anime » O-Parts Hunter
Anime » Ouran High School Host Club
Anime » Petshop Of Horrors
Book » Phantom of the Opera
Cartoon » Pocahontas
Movie » Prince of Egypt
Anime » Prince of Tennis
Anime » Princess Mononoke
Anime » Record of Lodoss War
Anime » Romeo × Juliet
Anime » Rurouni Kenshin
Anime » Sailor Moon
Anime » Saint Tail
Anime » Saiyuki
Anime » Samurai Champloo
Anime » Samurai Deeper Kyo
Anime » Scrapped Princess
Anime » Slayers
Anime » Spirited Away
Game » Tales of Symphonia
Anime » Trigun
Anime » Tsubasa Chronicle
Anime » Vampire Princess Miyu
Anime » Venus Versus Virus
Anime » Violinist of Hameln
Anime » Weiss Kreuz
Anime » Witch Hunter Robin
Anime » Wolf's Rain
Misc » X-overs
Anime » xxxHOLiC
Anime » Yu Yu Hakusho
Game » Zelda
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Humor
Drama
Adventure
Horror
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Fantasy
Tragedy
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship
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