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since: 10-04-04, id: 682134
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Author has written 6 stories for Teen Titans, Real Adventures of Jonny Quest, Alias, Harry Potter, Buffy: The Vampire Slayer, and A Great and Terrible Beauty.
LunaSoleil07 is a registered beta reader but is currently not accepting beta reading requests: on hiatus/vacation.
LunaSoleil07's has left a hiatus/vacation message:
I have way too much going on in my life right now to make the commitment to act as beta. I will continue to honor the stories that I've already agreed to beta, but please do not contact me for new stories until November 2008. Thank you, and blessed be.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I am an English major in college, so I'm rather strict [some might say anal] about grammar and spelling. However, a "beta" should be exactly that: a beta-editor. That means that your story should have been edited first by you, the "alpha," before you send it to me. If the first few paragraphs are hideously incorrect, I will not look at the rest; I will tell you to try editing it yourself and then re-sending it. I am not paid to beta, so don't assume that I will do all your work for you. I'll tell you what parts need work, add comments where needed, but I refuse to entirely rewrite a story; that's ghost-writing, and I would require payment for that. Harsh? Maybe. True? Absolutely. When you message me to request beta-ing, include category, projected length, rating, and a summary of the story. Please, actually think about the summary. Telling me to "just read the story" leads me to believe that if you can't write even a simple summary, you won't be able to write a full story.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I excel at spelling and grammar [which includes punctuation], and usually check plot flow, characterization, and possibility. I also pay attention to verbiage and diction, since an idea won't be understood if the words are incorrect. I can tell you when your sentences are jerky, paragraphs are stilted, or where the story doesn't hold my attention. Dialogue and dependent clauses can be special cases for me -- I might pay more attention to those.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Sometimes I'll get so into a fic that I'll forget to beta it. Other times, I'll focus so much on the grammar that I'll lose sight of the plot. Since I'm an English major, I tend to use slightly pretentious language. I really like adverbs, commas, and compound-complex sentence structure.
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
Fandoms: Jossverse, Batman Beyond, Power Rangers, Dark Angel. Anything else, message me and ask if I'll beta it. One-shots are acceptable, as long as they're over 1200 words. Chaptered stories are all right if each chapter isn't ridiculously long [except in summer, when I have time]. I really like sci-fi; add a dash of romance, and I will most likely jump at the chance to read a story prior to its being posted on FFN.
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
I refuse to read or beta: (1) stories written in net-speak or 1337 (LEET); (2) stories that have not been edited at least once by the author; (3) rape-fic; (4) slash or femmeslash; (5) mindless violence [as in, it doesn't further the plot]; (6) stories littered with senseless sexual acts or references; (7) Mary-Sues, unless you want me to MST it and send it back [note: MSTs are currently deemed unacceptable and unpublishable by FFN].
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Tv » Angel
Cartoon » Batman Beyond
Misc » Buffy X-overs
Tv » Buffy: The Vampire Slayer
Book » Charlaine Harris
Cartoon » Danny Phantom
Tv » Dark Angel
Tv » Firefly
Book » Harry Potter
Cartoon » Teen Titans
Tv » Terminator: Sarah Connor Chronicles
Comic » X-Men
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Parody
Supernatural
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
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