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since: 03-20-05, id: 779304
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Author has written 39 stories for Danny Phantom, Harry Potter, Charlie Bone, Naruto, X-Men: The Movie, Invader Zim, Transformers/Beast Wars, Avatar: Last Airbender, Jak and Daxter, and Cars.
P.A.W.07 is a registered beta reader but is currently not accepting beta reading requests: on hiatus/vacation.
P.A.W.07's has left a hiatus/vacation message:
I'm currently co-writing a fic with ScienceteacherSE, and betaing for MoonRose91 and her 'Mute' saga. Yet, despite this, will accept short one-shots.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Hello. I’m volunteering to be a beta, because I’m sick of seeing stories not reach their potential ... plus, I like to procrastinate when it comes to writing my own fictions. XD

Besides those two main reasons, the other reason I'm doing this is because it always bothers me when I run across a fanfic that has a wonderful ‘idea’ behind it, but the story is lacking in content and/or spelling accuracy.

I have been writing for a long time, so I am experienced. I'm also friendly when offering advice. Some works I have co-written or beta-ed (or both) for are:

Matter of Survival: a transformer's 07 by ScienceSE which is basically a spin-off of my story Promise Not to Tell, except hers is about none other than femme Frenzy: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4500506/1/Matter_Of_Survival

Mute and Feeling Lost: are by MoonRose91 and I'm her beta. Its a transformers 07 fic about a mute girl named Emma and her adventures. First: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4112774/1/Mute ; Second: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4302932/1/Feeling_Lost

Barricade Surprise: is a story by Psionic Star. Mostly I just help co-write and offer plot advice for her Transformer 07 story about a femme-barricade: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4871838/1

Furthermore, as a last note, if you are not sure if your story is in my 'no' category, drop me a note and we'll discuss it.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I love giving constrictive criticism, especially on the matter of fluency.

I also like helping new authors in the matter of adding description to their stories, be it the mentality of the character or the setting.

I enjoy helping people brainstorm if they reach a roadblock in their story or need help increasing the depth of the story line.

Last, but not least, I also help in de-sueing a Mary-Sue.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I will admit that I have occasionally missed small spelling errors here and there, but that is a rarity. So, if you think you are a better grammar whore than me, I recommend someone else. XD

Also, I am lacking on time, especially during the school year, so it may take two to three days to get a long chapter back since I have such a busy schedule.
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
Preferred? I don’t have any true favorites. If the base of the story line is well thought out and coherent, I’ll try and help. Also, I don’t mind slash, and hardcore scenes do not ‘gross me out’. Furthermore, I don't mind slight AU's or crossovers. I am very opened minded and support new ideas. In fact, I love praising people that can think up new ideas for their genre.

Plus, this isn’t important, but I love gore and fighting scenes.
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
Transformer category: I do not fancy transformers turned human or human TF's (humans turned into transformer doesn't bother me). I also will not proofread Sam/Bee fics; no offense, but I’ve never been able to think of those two as anything more than friends. I have never watched Beastwars, so don’t ask.

Invader Zim category: if you make Dib too ‘gay’ in Zim/Dib slash, I will not accept, but I don't mind the pairing as long as you keep them somewhat in character.

Other sections: No complaints as of yet.

Finally, I do not mind Original Characters (as I've already mentioned), but I will not read a story that focuses completely on just the OC.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Cartoon » Avatar: Last Airbender
Anime » D.Gray-Man
Cartoon » Danny Phantom
Anime » Death Note
Movie » District 9
Anime » Dragon Ball Z
Cartoon » Dragon Booster
Anime » Fullmetal Alchemist
Book » Harry Potter
Comic » Hellboy
Anime » Howl's Moving Castle
Cartoon » Invader Zim
Game » Jak and Daxter
Anime » Naruto
Movie » Nightmare Before Christmas
Game » Psychonauts
Anime » Soul Eater
Cartoon » Transformers/Beast Wars
Cartoon » Treasure Planet
Movie » X-Men: The Movie
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Parody
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
Spiritual
Tragedy
Crime
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship
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