I want someone who is willing to commit. Of course, I know that you want someone to READ and REVISE your story, but you have to be in contact with me. I can't stand it when people say they'll do this and do that, but not actually DO it. My criticism is sometimes harsh, but I honestly want to help and that is all. I enjoy reading and writing. I read very quickly but still pick out errors. I'm an author as well. I can easily characterize the main characters in the Harry Potter universe.

I'm also a writer so I'm pretty good at bouncing ideas.
I am quick at editing and revising.
Spelling
Punctuation (uses of commas and periods)
Sentence structure (Changing the structure so that it does not sound chunky or lengthy)
Dialogue (I make it so it sounds like someone in REAL life)
Format (separating paragraphs, number of lines)
Characters- (I can tell when someone is out of character. I really despise Mary/Gary Sues)

Forgetting certain points. Sometimes I mention something in the last chapter but forget to "finish" it in the next.
I'm American so I can't help with British phrases.
Sometimes I want things to be perfect. If you don't do something I tell you to do, I will bother you until you finally DO it.

H/HR!
Angsty stories.
Humorous stories.
Romance but not so fluffy. I CAN read it, but it...well, it irks me.

Nothing extremely fluffy.
Nothing overly dramatic (for example, 40 chapters of Harry and Hermione arguing and having make up snogs)
No Crossovers
No songfics
No stories that have NO MAGIC!
No D/G
No Slash (nothing against homosexuals...it's just something I'm not good at)

Book » Harry Potter

Romance Humor

Drama Adventure

Mystery Angst

Hurt/Comfort