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since: 11-30-05, id: 940983
Author has written 4 stories for Mario, and Shakespeare.
β : LuigiGirl-22 is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I'm a fiction - once fan fiction at one point - writer going by the pen name of "LuigiGirl-22". As you may know by reading my profile; I don't write fanfiction any longer, but I'm still available for Beta-ing. (You can also find me on Fictionpress.com; I've transferred over to there.) I'm focusing more on writing things that are my own now; rather than using characters already created by other people. But I'm still beta-ing.
I'm a huge fan of Mario, mainly the Paper Mario series (except for Super Paper Mario). I sometimes write some of my own work, which isn't based on anything.
Most of my work is written in First Person (ex. I, me), as it is known that I have great strength in that area - but I don't mind Third Person, either.
I'm not here to make sure you become the best fanfiction writer, everyone has their own opinions. I'm only here to give you suggestions to get unstumped, or give you encouragement, and edit any grammar/spelling issues that may occur - I'm mainly here to read over your work and give you tips.
-- If you want me to edit your work, please try to be available on MSN when I do. If you can't reach me through there, E-Mail or Personal Messaging shall work fine.
The reason? I want to make sure you receive any advice or suggestions I give you. I want to hear your opinions. After all, it's your work. Not mine.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I mainly excel in First Person. I'm decent with my spelling and grammar, that sort of thing. I enjoy writing some dark things; things with confusing twists and stuff like that.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I lack slightly in description, in comparison to some very skilled authors here; but overall, I'm decent. I have trouble writing in certain character roles; and have a slightly difficult time in developing personalities and characters.
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
Genres: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Friendship, General, Poetry, Suspense, Horror, and Tragedy... List goes on; I do everything except Sci-Fi.
I prefer Romance, Hurt/Comfort, or Friendship out of that list, though.
Also, I will look over Shakespearean fanfiction of the following plays:

Romeo & Juliet
Much Ado About Nothing
Hamlet
The Merchant of Venice

This is because I'm yet to read the others, but once I do, I'll add them to the list.
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
I won't read Harry Potter, either, but I'm free to go over grammar and punctuation and other stuff like that. :)
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Game » Luigi's Mansion
Game » Mario
Book » Phantom of the Opera
Game » Pokémon
Play » Shakespeare
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Poetry
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Parody
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Fantasy
Spiritual
Tragedy
Western
Crime
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship
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