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since: 12-08-05, id: 945884
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Author has written 16 stories for Warhammer, StarTrek: Deep Space Nine, Lord of the Rings, Silmarillion, Batman, Star Wars, Misc. Tv Shows, Doctor Who, Chronicles of Narnia, Legend of the Five Rings, and Great Divorce.
β : Morohtar is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I work on the principle that anyone who is spending time to get a beta-reader wants to become a better writer, so all my comments will be "this would be better if . . .". Having said that, I won't go through a piece of work and highlight every single grammar and spelling error. I consider those things to be basic stuff - I'll point out if a piece is hamstrung by major errors (but won't list them all if there are a lot of them). This is because that's not, IMO, the job of a beta reader. If there is a single small error (which is probably a typo) I'll point that out.

What will I do? I'll tell you how I think the story works, what fits with the genre, what doesn't, and give you a few options that I think will help it fit better. I won't give you plots and stuff - again, that's not my job, but I might give inspiration for scenes and so forth.

Ultimately, YOU are writing the story. Not me. I won't tell you how to write it - I'll read it, try to understand what you are trying to do, and then tell you what I think YOU can do to make it a better story while keeping it in YOUR style and within your intended aims.

It would be nice (but not essential) if everyone who asks me to beta has a short description of "where their story is going". I might want to see that . . .
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I read and review very quickly, and I have an excellent knowledge of the fandoms I beta for. Everyone says I write wicked action scenes. I have a detailed knowledge of general literature, and enjoy creating characters and situations which are references to popular and high-brow culture.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I tend to write somewhat linear, direct plots - the complexity in my stories comes from description. My stories can tend to be slow and thoughtful outside of the action scenes.
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
I enjoy good action stories, especially those which are firmly grounded in the logic of the world. A well-written romance is a joy (especially Peter / OC for Narnia, as I am staff on a C2 for that genre!) Stories with emotional themes are welcome, but they MUST be grounded in canon. I also really like philosophical / theological stories (but see below!)
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
Angst and torture fics, anything with gratuitous sex or violence (sex or violence are fine - just have a reason!) No slash and no incest (unless it is justified within canon and not gratuitous). Philosophical and theological stories which advance notions totally alien to the canon author (for example, a Susan Pevensie redemption fic where Aslan realizes he made a mistake, or that Aslan was wrong etc. etc.) are a definite no-no. If you trick me into reviewing or betaing one of these, I won't be impressed . . .
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Book » Chronicles of Narnia
Book » Lord of the Rings
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Drama
Poetry
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Supernatural
Suspense
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
Spiritual
Tragedy
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