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Ohka Breynekai 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 02-20-06, id: 994108
web: Homepage
Author has written 3 stories for Danny Phantom.
Ohka Breynekai is a registered beta reader but is currently not accepting beta reading requests: on hiatus/vacation.
Ohka Breynekai's has left a hiatus/vacation message:
So, I am working as a beta for too many people right now and will not be accepting any more requests until I'm less busy. Thanks!
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I've only recently discovered this Beta Reader application on my profile. But so far I am working for several sources and have helped my classmates on many occasions. I'm a perfectionist, so you can rely on me to do my very best or not do it at all.
If you would like a piece beta-read by me, you can expect a reply within two-three days. I will also try my hardest to not alter any intended effects of the works, but offer my insight on everything that strikes me as a little off.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I excell at grammar. For proof, I suggest you read some of Chapter 22 of my story, Twin Heroes. I obsessively scan my own chapters before I post them, to make sure that all of the spellings and punctuations are correct, and that the words flow smoothly.
I currently have a 98 in my Pre-AP English class and one of my works was published in my school's Literary Magazine.
Also, I can act as a thesaraus and add a bit of colorful vocab to your chapters.
And, I pay close attention to facts and plot events. If there is a historical reference, I will check it out, and if the plot doesn't flow, I will tell you.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I may not be able to point out character flaws farther than, "That character wouldn't do that!" My suggestions on that side will be fairly limited.
Preferred: types of entries I prefer over others
I'd like to read about shows and novels that I am familiar with. This would include Danny Phantom, Fullmetal Alchemist, Death Note, Twilight, Invader Zim, and Harry Potter. There are others, I'm sure, but I would like to see the most from this area.
Would Rather Not: types of entries I do not want to beta for
I will not read stories with excessive yaoi in it, or excessive cussing. That means, "I'm not going to do that ****ing homework that that ****ing ***** gave me! What the **** is that ***** thinking?!" That is an exaggeration, but it gets the point across.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » T
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime » Avatar: Last Airbender
Cartoon » Danny Phantom
Anime » Death Note
Anime » Fullmetal Alchemist
Book » Harry Potter
Cartoon » Invader Zim
Book » Twilight
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Drama
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
Tragedy
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