War broke out. many have died. What was what to be? The answer will be in the wheel of time pt.1 !

I wrote this in class over about a week its not done but I have bad writers block please tell me if you like it and give me some ideas.

As the crimson essence fills the air and stains the ground gracfully red. we live forever searching. searching. searching for a place to call home...

Alex spends over 3 years with out her sister Jessica. until one day during training Tyler appears and tries to kill her until Alex see's her. Alex's life changes after she's found her she was once lost and now found.

John has been going to a private school for a long while, I dont know what category this goes under, so i submitted it to the name that fit the story most...

Story...That basically explains and follows a girl as she grows and as everything happens in her life. It unfolds as the chapters go up.

A girl enters a dream world, but who will save her, will evil take control ? read and find out !