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Orpheus reunites with Eurydice after his death. A romantic reimagining of the Orpheus legend from Ovid's "Metamorphoses".

Story I'm working on. Advice, perceptions, critics, on how to make this piece better are always welcome.

This story is a spin-off from my previous story "A Letter to Paris." It uses Ovid's technique from "Metamorphoses" to tell the story of Dandy Lion, Paris's assigned wife.