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charter:	The title pretty much speaks for itself. After seeing so much badly-written fanfiction, who wouldn't snap? Have fun. Or not. Obviously if your story is in here, you need to improve. A lot. Don't take it personally. It isn't an attack on anyone, because I have no idea who any of you are, so stop scowling like that. Take this as a chance to brush up on your writing skills.

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1. Split » by Invasion-of-my-Heart reviews

Vegeta has two lifes on Frieza's ship. One of love and compashion to Bulma and Anna, and one of anger and hate. Anna is me. Flames will be put into my own little Hell to keep it warm.

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 8,722 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 7-18-11 - Published: 5-27-11 - Bulma & Vegeta

2. rescuer, farther , master by imortalloveangel reviews

my version of how QuiGon and ObiWan meet. not as sad as my first fic and happy ending.

Jedi Apprentice - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 451 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-9-06 - Complete

3. Be who I need you to be » by UltimateGotenFan reviews

Trunks is getting married to someone but it's not Pan. With her heart broken can Goku be who she needs him to be to heal Pan's broken heart?

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 9 - Words: 9,409 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 5-12-11 - Published: 4-12-11 - Pan & Goku - Complete

4. Damn flu by LinkinparkGxVyaoifan reviews

Vegeta gets the flu and he won't stay in bed what can Goku do to keep him still Warning Yaoi

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 591 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-1-11 - Vegeta & Goku

5. Teacher Love! » by BluePurpleSky reviews

Edward never came back because bella never jumped off the cliff, Alice and Jasper broke up because Alice blame him for having to leave bella, Bella got turned into a vampire by Victoria when she was twenty-six years old..more summary in the 1st chapterR&R

Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 13 - Words: 10,391 - Reviews: 83 - Updated: 7-15-11 - Published: 8-24-10 - Bella & Jasper - Complete

6. Rogue » by Amy-E-85 reviews

Ponyboy is jumped by a vampire girl and forced to drink her blood. What will he do as a vampire, in love with a Vampire Princess? PM me if you have ideas for future chapters! Thnx!

Outsiders - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,001 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 6-20-10 - Published: 6-17-10 - Ponyboy C.

7. A Ponyboy No One Would Expect by RozaHathoway reviews

When Pony mysteriously disappears for 3 days, only to come back insanely gorgeous, with ice cold skin, and no heartbeat, many things will change!

Crossover - Outsiders & Twilight - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 40 - Published: 2-21-10 - Ponyboy C. & James

8. My Baby » by Depp1987 reviews

Darry/Pony FLUFF

Outsiders - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,135 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 1-16-09 - Published: 1-12-09 - Ponyboy C. & Darry C.

9. what happened last night by YouSayLovesOverrated reviews

thia ia my version of what happens to Ponyboy after the rumble and after reading the book i see there pretty close

Outsiders - Rated: K - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 523 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-26-10 - Sodapop C. & Ponyboy C.

10. One Boy, One Girl by youngkit reviews

I,Kirasummer Cutris,only girl in the gang have ran away and in the prosses something both wonderful and sometimes regetful happens.Read as Ponyboy my brother,Johnny,my borfriend and I embark on a journey that can change our lives. JohnnyXOC mainly

Outsiders - Rated: T - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,727 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-26-10 - Johnny C.

11. tik toks arrival » by tick tock oh YEAAAA reviews

this is a story of my character named tik-tok he has my personality and a sprinkle of love like me

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 11-12-10 - Published: 10-14-10

12. Secrets are not meant to be broken, chapter 1 » by MajinKitty230 reviews

Vegeta has grown soft over the years since Bra was born, and him and Bra have a great father&daughter bond, but what happens when it becomes more than that?, will she eventually tell their secret? Bra is a child right now .

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K - English - Family/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,624 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 12-28-10 - Published: 11-16-10 - Bra & Vegeta

13. THE LOST BLONDIE » by hopetess reviews

THIS STORY IS ABOUT WHEN NARUTO IS BEING CHAST BE A MOB ON HIS BIRTHDAY. HE PRIES THAT HE CAN GO SOMEWHERE. NINE TAILED FOX ANSWERES HIM. HE TAKES HIM TO IASONS PENTHOUSE. I HOPE YOU LIKE IT. PLEASE READ AND REVIEW. PLEASE! LOVE HOPETESS.

Crossover - Ai no Kusabi & Naruto - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 6,421 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 2-27-12 - Published: 3-1-10 - Iason Mink & Naruto U.

14. HOw Bulma Mets Vegeta » by Vegetalover12 reviews

A new kid that came from the same planet as Goku came to Bulma's school and Bulma falls in love with him.

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,106 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-16-10 - Published: 6-24-10 - Bulma & Vegeta

15. Bulma's diary » by Vegetalover12 reviews

This is a story about Bulma writing in her diary about how Vegeta and her got together.

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,075 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-1-10 - Bulma & Vegeta

16. Itatchis Demise » by sushi.roll119 reviews

just as itatchi dies sasuke starts thinking.

Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,121 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-23-10 - Published: 8-9-10 - Sasuke U. & Itachi U. - Complete

17. THE DAY CHLOE ADMITTED HER LOVE FOR SASUNARU by SexehMemoires reviews

NARUSASU ACTUALLLYLYLYLYLYLYYKJNSFKJDS!11!1!1!1! DFDSJ F

Cougar Town - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 803 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-30-10 - Bobby C. & Sheila

18. LOVELY ATHRUN by Hyosun reviews

Cagalli and Athrun have a date but Athrun came late Romantic Story

Gundam Seed - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 435 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-15-10 - Cagalli Y. A. & Athrun Z. - Complete

19. Androids Saga with a twist by SS3-Vegito reviews

we all know the story of future mirai? trunks. well what happens when a full bood saiyan sn of goku is there as his friend the whole time? yeah i suck at summaries R&R please! D

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-5-10 - M. Trunks

20. goku nd freeza becum frinds by Jacob Douglas reviews

wen goku needs help, freeza savs the day and they fite bad guys together

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 473 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 8-24-10 - Goku & Frieza - Complete

21. Universe 16 » by hieimasteroflight reviews

Follow what would have happened when Vegito stayed fused.A tribute to DBM Things might be a little different though.

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,126 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-5-10 - Published: 7-1-10 - Complete

22. The Panties and Boxers match by Mikkibaby reviews

Vegeta challenges his sister Sharona to a fighting match, but it was recently changed to a Panties and Boxers match! So enjoy this exciting, powerful, and sexy match up!

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,233 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-14-10 - Vegeta - Complete

23. A Life of a Sygin » by Tabi 'Chi' Moon reviews

This story will be about a girl's life as a Sygin. Warning: this fanfic is not for people who know the plot and the characters very well.

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,508 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-8-10 - Published: 2-15-10 - Piccolo & Gohan

24. Shadow by blazingmoon101 reviews

A new girl arrived in Kohana... who is she? and where is she from? I DO NOT OWN NARUTO! there will be spoilers later on in the story!

Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 541 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-10-10 - Kakashi H.

25. the ture meangin of powre » by Forbidden Angel of Darkness reviews

goku find ture meaning of powre WAT HE DO NOW?1!1!1/? RED AND FND OUTED!1! r/r plz

Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 2 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 4-5-10 - Goku

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