This is one of the most adorable things I've ever read in my life. This story is so cure and so sweet I almost can't stand it! I love Ororo and Jean's relationship and you just told it in the most beautiful way! I've read this story a couple of times now but apparently I never reviewed but I love it, I love it so much I want to cry

Love the fic! Very good for the family.

Oh! This was so very heartwarming. :) I like the backstory you've given Jean in this - the bit at teh start with the bullying felt very real. I like how it's in stark contrast to the popular, confident teenager she eventually grows up to be. It really makes a statement about her character, her growth and how even Jean was a scared, bullied little child once. Her relationship with Storm is just lovely, too.

All in all, this was very very cute. Thanks for sharing! :)

Your little story was really good. I'm glad, I read it.

Normally I don't like Jean, but as a kid she's really cute. The beginning was kind of sad, seeing Jean is outcasted and bullied by the other children. But why did Layla call her Annie?

And her interaction with Ororo was so cute. But the things that woman thought saddened me. On one hand, it's cute to see, that Jean didn't said anything because she doesn't wanted to upset Ororo, but on the other hand she'll have those things in her mind and nobody to talk about it with.

I liked Ben and how he had hope, that Ororo would maybe take notice of him. He was kind of cute.

And Ororos words are so true. It's not always 'blood is thicker than water'. Sometimes it's the other way around.

I loved your story. Thank you for sharing it with others.

I love your stories. I printed off "Sweet Dreams" and I like to read it in my Psychology class to throw people off...It makes me laugh.

Faved!

Ayaia of the Moon

wow. this was very well written and evoked so many emotions. this is the first fic i've read from you...i'll be sure to check out the rest of your work.

it was great. i loved it a lot. thank you.

I absolutely positively loved it! I just loved the way that you've written about the bond between Ororo and Jean. And reading about Ben was amusing!

Nice one-shot. Very well written.

This is nice

Sweet!

cool! - PLEASE write another one like this! Maybe with Scott in it? ;) I love Jott! ;)Anyways - keep on writing X-man fanfics and I'll keep on reading!

Sob! What a touching story, especially the part where Ben looked at the picture. Definitely one of my favourites...

Oh Wow. That was so beautiful I honestly don't quite know what to say right now, other than I started crying. Oh and Ben the ice cream guy rocks my socks. I really hope that you write more.

this is one of the cutest fics in the world!

I cried. Literally. It makes me so sad to think that people can be so nice on the outside and be mean ignorant jerks on the inside, it also makes me sad to think that anybody around us could be like that and I suppose thats why if humans were ever telepathic the first thing they'd ever learn was that the mind is truely the only place where its private. Then, of course there are those people you get where they show what their thinking outwardly- but that just plain pisses meh off P Lol. Aside from the annoying thoughts of /mine/, I basically wrote this reveiw to tell you that this story and most of your others touched me very deeply. And although the writing format could be better and it could be longer and even changed from so many one-shots, it still touches me and most of your storys have yet to not make me cry, so I'd just like to say congratulations ) Funeral Of Hearts.