 lady yg 2009-04-10 . chapter 2 sounds interesting. please write more to tell about sasami's adventure and finding true love. |
 animeangel088 2008-08-11 . chapter 2write more! |
 Jibril Mudo 2008-08-11 . chapter 2I have read the first chapter a long time back. Was I surprised to see this again! Don't worry about the old negative reviews, the signed one was of an old rabid R-fan that not's around so much anymore.
Anyway, as a big Tenchi/Sasami (adult) fan I hope you continue it in that vein. And if anybody mentions ages, remember that Tenchi is 15 and Ryoko is 5017 so that girl is cradle robbing more than anybody else:D
I also see your writing improved with age. It's actually very good now. Since the lapse in time and difference in quality, you may want to rewrite your first chapter to attract more readers: otherwise many will skip the rest of your fic thinking the first chapter is representative of the rest.
Good luck! |
 SasamiisInuyasha's 2003-03-10 . chapter 1 Please write more! |
 Sipia wizdom 2003-02-22 . chapter 1Yay I love it! Write more |
 Technical Joe 2003-01-31 . chapter 1Nice story! Oh yeah, thanks for the reviews! Chapter three of game show crazy is up! |
 TheOriginalM 2002-10-08 . chapter 1Very good. |
 Space Pirate Minagi 2002-10-07 . chapter 1Oh, of course. If Sasami were a bit older, it's certain that Tenchi would fall in love with her. Please. As if Tenchi is that shallow. |
 AnimeBunny 2002-10-06 . chapter 1im a big sasamixtenchi fan!please do continue your story but...hmm...make washu, well uhhh smart and...big headed (sorry washu fans but she is!oh yeah and it's little washu!:P). hehehe *wearing shirt with "sasamixtenchi and cloudxaeris* uhhhh... hehehe |