This is very good. I'm sorry to see you haven't worked on it in so long. I's love to read more. -Clare

Interesting, I like the fact that it "hurts" people of magic to use Hebrew, I would never think of that, I would only think that the name Jesus Christ, would do that (and worse) to them.

Hum... *wonders of to ponder*

i love this story you must continue as soon as you can or when ever you want i guess but please continue it anyways ^.^
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Kagome

Please continue this most interesting story! It seems quite unique!

Please update soon! You've got me hooked! I want to know what happens next!

Please update this soon! I wanna know what happens next!

I first found your story in Destiny's Gateway and loved it. It is much easier to watch for new chapters here. I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Come on! You have 16 REVIEWS!!! That's so cool! come on please write more soon!

This is such an AWESOME story! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! I can't wait! ^.^

Fascinating! Keep it up!

your doing very good with this please keep up the great work i can see you've put alot of time behind your writing and doing very well with it

Excellent! I love how you've given Jareth a knowledge and respect for God. It adds another depth to the story, and gives us a view of a world that goes beyond the happenings of the labyrinth. Great so far, keep posting!

This is really excellent so far! You have a very original idea, and I'm sure it's leading into a really great story!

This is really good. I never thought of Jareth or the Labyrinth this way. You make it very interesting. I definitely would like to see how this goes.

wow loved it! hope to see more soon!