Exciting story!

Jenn...that was absolutely brilliant. I loved every word of it. You have a masterful talent for using just the right words to describe a feeling, an emotion or a happening in the lives of our explorers. And, Roxton's concern for the unconscious Marguerite squeezed the soft parts of my heart...you beautifully displayed his love for her. This was a stunningly beautiful piece of work...and I sincerely hope you are working on another one to be submitted SOON!

Sorry about chapter 3 guys! The consequences of uploading late at night lol. Should be fixed as soon as ff.net updates the stories.

Thanks for letting me know!

Jenn B.

This was GREAT! I think something went wrong with chapter 3(?) it's a repeat of another chapter. But, it's ok- ya just might want to switch... ;)

Awesome! I thought Roxton's vigil was so sweet. Hope you write more soon! :) :) :)

Enjoyed your story very much. Unfortunately, chapter three seems to be missing. The one posted under chapter three is the same as chapter one. I'd sure like to read how Marguerite was saved.