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Murasaki-yanagi 5/8/04 . chapter 8
Wow that was your first fic? It was extremely well writen, my first fiction wasn't nearly as good. _ A lemon would have been nice, but leaving it to the imagination was a nice touch.
Also a couple of questions...what name is your stories under on mediaminer and fandomination? I tried to find that story "The Gift" but wasn't able to. Did you remove them from there? Just curious. _
You also mentioned that you wanted people to do art for you. I actually started drawing some picture for your fic "Switch" when I read it the other night. I'll be sure to send you them when I'm done. Maybe if you like them I could do more!
Silent Lullabies 1/28/03 . chapter 4
I stumbled on this by accident but I'm certainly glad I did. Very well written. I like the way you get into ken's mind and how he tried to show aya that the rest of the world is still moving with or without him. Very sweet. I'll have to keep my eye out for more of your work.
Ms. B. Rabbit 11/27/02 . chapter 7
AWWWWW! Kawaii! That was very cute and sweet. I liked it! Awesome. _

Midori
Ms. B. Rabbit 11/27/02 . chapter 6
Aww! Aya would look so lovely coming in from the cold like that! I want to read the end, so here I go!

Midori_
Ms. B. Rabbit 11/27/02 . chapter 5
Yeah! Go for it, Aya! There still plenty of time to get KenKen. This is cute!

Mids!
Ms. B. Rabbit 11/27/02 . chapter 4
Oh...drama, drama...Aya can be such a jerk. I understand his pain, but he should really take a look at things, like Ken said.

I like your style! Good stuff.

Mids!
Ms. B. Rabbit 11/27/02 . chapter 3
Yes, Ken does look so much better with brown eyes, ne? I love him that way...

Does Aya truly have no wish other than revenge? Hmm...

Mids
Ms. B. Rabbit 11/27/02 . chapter 2
Awww! What's his last wish? I want to know!

Midori
Ms. B. Rabbit 11/27/02 . chapter 1
Aww! Poor KenKen! Of course Aya cares...in his cold...reserved...I hate everyone sort of way...LOL! But underneath all that, he is just a hurt young boy looking for revenge...

Cry is a great song! Sad, though...

Midori_
olivia-yuymaxwell 10/23/02 . chapter 8
yay! u're so great! 2 of ur previews're really tempting -

i love sappy, but i love humor too ;

uhmm may be Switch ne? :) 'coz that one looks so amusing for me :)

but lotsa RANKEN Pleazeeeeeeeee _
Ryia Jen Rowen 10/21/02 . chapter 8
*pulls out a sign with "SWITCH!" Wrote on it and starts marching around* We want switch. We want switch.

But really now, I just think that having the boys switch bodies like that will be totaly cool.
fei3 10/21/02 . chapter 8
SWIIIIITCH!

It's funny! I was already laughing in the preview. LOL

But whichever you choose to work on is fine with me cos Dead Zone sounds quite intriguing too, tho I've never read the book so dunno wat's it about.

Thankies for the previews!
kamibukurosama 10/20/02 . chapter 8
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siberian 10/20/02 . chapter 8
both of yor previews sound very promising _! but if I have to choose, I'll choose the humor one, The Switch. hahaha, omi's stubby legs... kekeke... and aya sounding so cheerful :D... I can't wait to read that!

but any which one you choose top work on first is fine to me _! gambatte ne!
siberian 10/20/02 . chapter 8
both of yor previews sound very promising _! but if I have to choose, I'll choose the humor one, The Switch. hahaha, omi's stubby legs... kekeke... and aya sounding so cheerful :D... I can't wait to read that!

but any which one you choose top work on first is fine to me _! gambatte ne!
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