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| pikachu 2008-06-04 ch 12, anon. | abuseWow... Your story is fantastic. Its one of those completely incredible pieces that take your breath away and then leave you feeling empty when you've finished it. |
| Anon. 2008-06-02 ch 2, anon. | abuse"Pokemon Master" deserves a ton more reviews for a story like this. It is a stunning, epic work of beautiful dark imagination and extremely talented writing. For the full story, try this link directly to Pokemon Master: http://members..au/~aceywacey/pokemon.htm |
| I LOVE ACEY's WRITING 2008-06-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseO_O Oh my Lord. This is THE greatest piece of fanfiction on this site and you are one of the most talented writers like, EVER. This is wonderful. Pure, amazing, unadulterated wonderfulness all wrapped up in HTML text and on my computer screen. I couldn't breathe when reading some of this, that's how good it is. I love everything about this story, as another reviewer said, especially TR appearance (Jessie, James and Meowth |
| SithAnimeLord 2008-06-01 ch 5, | abuseYou should write books, you'd be great! |
| SithAnimeLord 2008-06-01 ch 4, | abuseYou are suirsoluly(spelled wrong i know)the most descriptive authour ive read sp far. |
| SithAnimeLord 2008-06-01 ch 2, | abuseYuor are amazingly descriptive! |
| SithAnimeLord 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, amazing description. I'm saddened to see the last update was six years ago, i hope this story is complete. |
| Jinxaret 2008-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuse!ATTENTION! If you guys want to read the final chapter of this addictive epic click the link in acey`s profile and follow the old link to his newer homepage! I don`t know if that will work, but I`ll try to post the direct link here nontheless: http://members..au/~aceywacey/pindex.htm Wish you huge fun reading! My review: At first I want to warn you that I`m not a native speaker, so please forgive me possible grammar mistakes. THIS WILL BE ONE OF MY FAVOURITE STORIES FOREVER! It isn`t just a fanfiction, it is an epic; not only great in length but also great for the ideas, the huge amount of effort you put in here and the character development! I`m just a little sad that the final chapter 13 doesn`t explain what happenend to the others besides Ashura and Mistaria ya know ( and why Ash still calls her Mistaria and not ValdARIA or something like that since she`s Valdera as well).. but I would still give you an Outstanding for this story.. to say it in Harry Potter grades ;). The only thing I truly would change is the story`s description.. "11 years in the dark future ... things have changed" is just an... huge understatement I think.. it made it sound so unclear, so shallow.. BUT we know it`s the total opposite! I would change it to something more captivating so that more people will start to read it! I THINK IT IS NOT AN OVERSTATEMENT IF I SAY THAT EVERY POKEMON FAN OR SUPPORTER OF GREAT FANTASY LITERATURE SHOULD TRY THIS OUT!! Dedicated to acey from one of your biggest fans, Jinxie :) |
| Alyss Ashworth 2008-03-12 ch 12, | abuseHoly crap dude. (writer of review is left numb and speechless at the mere thought of this awesome fic, and cannot write anymore at the moment due to the greatness of what was just read) |
| Kayne Lee 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI've always been a huge fan of this story Ace, you are the greatest writer ever and definently the most imaginative and thought provoking. I first found Pokemon Master on the original site years ago and am happy you also posted them on an appropriate place for a prefect fiction like yours...I am so in love with this story. |
| Black Drazon 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! I had no idea this fic was here! I really don't know how many people this will help, but if I can help even one person see the conclusion to this, my favourite fanfic of all time, I will. Acey posted the last chapter of this fic almost four years ago, everyone, on his website. It's still there, and it's the best one. You could follow the link, but here's the direct one: http://members. htm |
| Osiris Sacmott 2008-01-07 ch 12, anon. | abuseThis story has two really good things going for it, besides the fact it's "dark" Pokemon fanfiction--and pretty good "dark" Pokemon fanfiction, at that. The first is the number of cameos crammed into all thirteen chapters. Practically every character from the Red and Blue days of the anime makes an appearance, from Team Rocket (obviously) to A.J. (not as obvious) to Seymour (wha...) to the girl from the Ponyta, who remarkably enough plays a pretty big role. People who hate the anime but like the video games may not find this important, but if you're one of those people, this may not be your kind of story. The second are the number of mysteries solved (and unsolved) throughout the story. Why are people lobbing magic spells at each other? Why does Ash have a samurai sword? A more pressing question: what on earth is going on with Misty's sister? What happened to Brock? What exactly are Master Pokemon, and on that subject, what on earth are Forbidden? In some other story, the author would go out of the way to explain everything, right from the get-go. But not here. Instead, background information is trickled at an almost agonizing pace throughout the first twelve chapters, until you reach the thirteenth and everything--or the everything that matters--is answered, including questions you never even thought of asking. Whether Ash's Pikachu is Forbidden or not, for example, is never explicitly addressed. He could be, or maybe all Pikachus turn black at level infinity. Who knows? All in all, this is basically a strange dystopian reworking of the Pokemon anime in which Ash has a katana, Misty has an evil twin sister out to kill her, all trainers have mysterious powers that apparently spring from a cataclysmic event several years ago, and your favorite characters go at each other in wild fight sequences. In other words, you'll probably enjoy it. |
| Random point 2007-11-21 ch 7, anon. | abuseThis is my first pokemon fanfic that I didn't think sucked beyond belief. Thanks for writing it. On another note you could argue that the "Dragonight" was from the Bill episode with the "undescovered" pokemon that was shaped very much like a Dragonite and was taller standing in the ocean than a lighthouse on a cliff, lending credability to the enormous size you wrote. |
| SCAR OF THE BLACK RIGHT HAN... 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseFreaking! Awesome! |
| Metometo 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseWewt. I first read this fic over five years ago, and it's great to see it still holds up all these years later. 10/10, this is one epic fanfiction. |