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HoratioCraver101
2009-10-05 . chapter 12
I love it. ^_^
Rori Potter
2009-06-02 . chapter 12
Severus is gone... THAT SUCKS FOR HARRY! I hope there is a sequel.
Shattered Rose of the Past
2007-08-09 . chapter 2
I read your story and I'm sorry to say but some paragraphs are taken from Forged within the Flames by McRaider the talk between Remus and Sev is identical. If you're not MsRaider then you shoul write your own stories not copy them.
Rogue Anne
2007-07-13 . chapter 12
*sobbing uncontrollably* That was so evil! I liked it, but, you killed off Severus! I will say no more here.
Psychiatrist13
2007-05-04 . chapter 5
I could kiss you right now! That was a total surprise that Neville was Dyslexic and yet so not...

You see I might be dyslexic, I'm getting tested and hardly anyone knows what that is!
luvbooks
2006-10-15 . chapter 1
cool
sillya
2006-10-09 . chapter 1
good..
ph0enixgirlie
2006-06-22 . chapter 12
hey hey

Nice story, I have enjoyed it :)
It´s well written, the only thing
i did not like was the part with
snape dying, but that part was
also well written... lol! But
there will be no bonding between
harry and snape, and a happy end.

But anways, it was a good story!

byebye Phoenixgirlie
NeoGetz2063
2006-02-14 . chapter 12
:'( Sev died :'( Brilliant story, but a slight confusion, Harry's legs were broken, or at least 1 was, then when his wrists break at the end, he manages to walk to the stall when he couldn't do that before, how?

Still loved reading this, i liked the way you kept it secret for so long from Harry, then he found out at the worst of times but accepted it.
animeangel088
2005-12-30 . chapter 12
good fic.
Serabi_warrior 88
2005-12-14 . chapter 1
I LOVE that poem! It is so beautiful! Did you write that yourself? I wish I could write stuff like that, but if I did my mum would think I was absolutely mental! hah!
pureslash
2005-03-25 . chapter 12
I think you shoule put a warning telling the readers that there is a major charactor death. I dont like when they die but with the exception of the end i enjoyed the story and thought it was well written.
Death&Darkness
2005-01-04 . chapter 9
Omg, Ek!
Death&Darkness
2005-01-04 . chapter 7
Hurry up, Sev! Tell Harry the truth!
SlytherinAngel666
2005-01-04 . chapter 3
Omg
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