Amazing story!! I can't wait for the next one!! Keep writing :)

yay i love the preview, cool pairing.
this was an awesome fic with a good mix of everything.

yay i loved this chapter they're reunited and of course the parts with tifa were funny. good story it sounds like you're preparing us for the sequal.

the ending was interesting poor cloud that will be a funny sight. yay i like this change. so aerith's gonna be allowed to return to him?!

amazing chapter rinoa's grief is... so real and the whole chapter had a good flow with the pov changes it was nice to show all the areas and the ending is interesting suspenseful.

interesting prophecy the cry thing sounds ominous reminds me of aerith's death and the whole genova thing the geostima she cured.
good chapter lots of development from sephiroth a little more inner turmoil might be good but you did a good job with it.

oh wow more complications and sephiroth is certainly changing rapidly but it is still believable; awesome job with that. great action scenes and i was wondering who the dreamer was, it fits.

oh and this is where yuna gets her pistols i love how you explain things with this why the continents differ, why the farplane, all that stuff; it's an awesome job and very creative too.

whole thing screams wrong or trap good cliffie.

good battle scenes and i think you captured the remorse and sadness very well.

good chapter i like the developments with seifer and sephiroth.
nice action and tension.

Seifer winced inwardly, but was careful not to show it. He struggled to remember fragments of what she had said. “I’m always wrong, you’re always right. I should always listen to Rikku?”

She clapped her hands, smiling. “You were listening!”

He nodded and have her a quick hug, followed by a kiss on the cheek. “Rikku, thanks for caring.” She laid a hand on her cheek where the kiss had landed, staring at his back as he walked away. She was confused, but quickly narrowed it down to a couple of things. Either he was weird, or worth keeping around. Maybe both.--lol

oh boy only rikku would be looking forward to a shouting match

Gilgamesh’s thoughts intruded. Young one, I believe I’m getting a headache. Would you stop these foolish games, and just kiss her? He shrugged, seemed like good advice to him, so he did.

Rikku’s eyes widened in surprise, as he leaned in and pressed his lips against hers. Hands that she intended to beat against his chest, instead found themselves resting on his shoulders and sliding around his back. She closed her eyes and accepted her defeat. The shouting was just supposed to be a lead in to the good part anyway. Who needed it?--lol

the skinny dipping thing was good funny too

This day he had lived through his worst nightmare. Something he had hoped and prayed would never occur, but knew to be inevitable. Selphie and Rikku had discovered each other, and started talking. He had achieved a headache of colossal proportions as shrieks of laughter, and high pitched talking pounded against his ears. The important thing was he had lived through it. After this, taking on an entire army and a Sorcerer seemed like a cake walk.--lol i just hope in your next fic they all meet up with yuffie. now that would be funny

Cid threw his hands in the air. “And the commander of the opposing army is named Sephiroth. I guess he’s the real deal too?” Rikku nodded and Cid stared at her incredulously. “And just when is Cloud Strife showing up?”

“He won’t be able to make it,“ Squall noted dryly. “Hair appointment.”--lol and it fits too does that mean they mention cloud's hair even in legend?


good chapter nice dvlpmt.

Tidus smiled at Yuna, expecting it to be received in kind. Nothing could have been further from the truth. Her arms were crossed, a stern expression on her face. Looking at the anger in her eyes, he considered going back and asking the Guado for a rematch. It might be safer.--lol yup i bet she is scary.

Tidus looked all around, hoping to see an ally. Rikku had her arms crossed as well, tapping a toe on the ground, glaring at Seifer “We’ll talk later.” She turned and headed up the path, Yuna following.

Rinoa said nothing, merely stared at Squall for a moment, before joining the other two.

Everyone else followed their lead. Tidus turned towards Squall and Seifer. “Guess we’re all in a little trouble.”

Seifer shivered a bit. He wasn’t looking forward to their ‘talk‘. He had learned that Rikku had a sharp tongue. “Yeah. I think so.”-- poor guys oh so i was wondering who rikku was worried abt if anyone in particular

at least squall knows how it works lol

good i like how sephiroth is changing but slowly and he certainly is not there yet. it's more realistic that way esp his callousness towards the guado he might have shown pity/mercy at one moment but that is hardly a character trait.

good job with the problems b/w rikku and seifer it would be to wierd if they got along tremendously at first though they certainly seem like they would address the problem quickly esp given the prodding by others.
oh boy more complications!

ah so she's gonna enjoy tormenting seifer now. i can't believe he agreed tho. he wasn't willing to bond to rinoa at first... but it'll be good for him to i'm sure. i like how squall feels too feelings don't instantly dissapear even if we want them to so it fits and his feelings for rinoa are much stronger so he'll get over it.