this is great! keep writing :)

Aawww, that's so sweet. It's kinda' funny that Logan writes poetry, though. Oh, well! Good none the less!

very good!

Nice. But you might want to rate this higher than "G". ^_~

beautifully written, flowed very well..its what would be considered "lyric poetry" GOOD lyric poetry. The passionate moment was done very well without all the fake x rated ** type enviorment. That scene was one of my favs in AJBAC too..sooo sad what happened next, but that scene was great fodder for the summer.

keep it up

peace
mystic