Ah, Jin. Thank you for reviewing Tower of Darkness, and I have decided to return the favor. Please note that I chose this story is that its the only one that currently peaked my interest. (and I have no knowledge of the other fandoms, I am sorry.)

The good: You have a rather good attention to detail, which is getting rarer and rarer with every story. Kudos! Also, every one seems to be in character. Also, your comedic bouts with Yami and Chibi are rather hilarious.

The bad: A common problem with most writers here on FanFiction have is that they don't paragraph. The problem here is that it sort of seams that you paragraph a little to often, leaving most of your paragraphs to be only a sentance long, sometimes not even being that, such as when a cast member is speaking.

The neutral: I wasn't sure wether or not naming each of your chapters was either innovative, or terribly cliche.

That all being said, I give this story an 7.4. Your writing skills have most likely gotten better since you finished this story. Once again, thank you for reading Tower of Darkness. (If your wondering wether my reviews have always been this way, I was inspired by Riggs.)

At first I was afraid it wasn't going to be very good but then I continued reading it to see, and it ended up really good! I like it! interesting characters... slightly confusing... Good! I like it ! :)

Squirt Sapphire

That was a good ending. It wrapped it up nicely, I think. It's nice to know that everyone had a happy ending, even Shadow Link. I've been reading GuruGuru214's stories lately, so, since finding out that Lupine was Link's brother, it's beginning to seem like he has siblings out the yin-yang. I guess I really should get a life, huh? Good story, I really enjoyed it. Gotta get me some of that Kokiri Fruit Punch. LOL.

A very cool 't really read stories this long (small attention span)but it was worth it.

Good. Sort of anticlimatic, but good. Is there more? Come on, at least tell me there's an epilogue?

Good story. I like the way you put Lace in there. I can only imagine Navi's dread when she found out that she had to babysit Link's little sister. Oh, the horror! BTW, I noticed that you got your disclaimer running again.

Nice story Tulip-Jin. I liked what Shadow told his Light side. Please continue with the story, and I like the idea of Link having a sister. I love this story.

hehe quotes: "Its lucky he didn't break apart both planes just breaking out," Can't wait for a final fight scene I know will come.

0.0 Link seems depressed! grins like an idiot,Heck, is an idiot I'll cheer him up with some cookies! runs into time portal with cookies

Link: What the ! $#!*$*%$# ! Get away from me freak! I don't want any cookies, leave me i my despair!

Me: stop being melodramatic! shoves cookie in his mouth

Link: What the he-! chews cookie, swallows Hey that was pretty good. Can I have another? happily eats cookies

Me: See all better

Link: But I have to finish the fic un-happy!

Me: pouts fine. cheers up again I'll give U cookies later skips away and link looked after her in a worried sort of way

Link: barfs up cookies Oh Goddess...

Keep writing please !

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Not to be rude, but, well, STORY IS TO HARD TO FOLLOW! i'm only at chapter 3, and I'm all-ready confused!so, i guess i should stop reading. sorry. I'll try again, but, well...

Nice story, though i must admit i have been a bit confused, especially in the beginning. See you have worked on writing in paragraphs, easier to read now.

PS i like too,though mostly maLik

I really like this story! I like how they travel between worlds and Ganon snoring thing. It's pretty interesting. I need to read more! Keep writing!

Interesting!

L-Gurl