Aww, poor Harry... :(

Very nicely written, but I'll point out that you missed out on some details that were given in the book, such as when Voldemort says "Stand aside, girl - Stand aside!" and stuff like that, and even more tidbits before James dies.

Other than that, it was good. :)

I like your writing style. :D

poor Harry, *cries* that was sad and kinda creapy. makes you want to murder Voldemort, that is if you didnt already want to... but i really liked it

Wow!...that was...chilling...!

Very well written!

Oh my goodness! Poor Harry! Oh, I hate Tom Riddle...

O...I like this one A LOT. This was a beautiful short fic, not really needing anything else to supplement it. Perfecto.

awwwwww bad Voldie! Bad Voldie! That was creepy, but not enough H/G to compensate it.

This is so sad! Your a good writer! You almost made my cry!

OMG! This is really good...I hope this story wins! I love your writing-you are such a talented writer.

::sniff:: so sad...::pats his head:: poor Harry...another great one of course...

very cool and very creepy.

The epitome of evil is but a shadow in the wake of reality. Falynne H.

I felt those words pound home as I read this. All I can say is that you have an excellent piece here.

Keep up the good work.

The Turkey

awwwww ... that was sad ...

good fic though ...

The Golden Goose

Yay for you! Love it! Angst gallore!