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your friendly griffindor
2005-03-23 . chapter 1
hey.. i really do want to read your story, but the end of the sentences are all cut off so i cant? i dont no if it your computer or mine?
Silverthreads
2004-07-23 . chapter 25
I have not yet done reading this chapter but Ginny's slow realization that perhaps her impulsivity was not such a good thing to follow and Neville's compassionate reaction to her made me want to write a review immediately. This is one of the best written of such sequences I have yet read. Here or anywhere.
Persephone Lupin
2004-07-22 . chapter 26
Wow, what a great story! Couldn't stop reading! And so many different points of view! You are a great author! I really like Varlerta and her special music magic, she's a great OC. Only that she falls in love with Sirius Black of all people ... poor Severus. Will he still have a chance with her in the sequel? I do hope so. Have to read on...
(and thanks for reviewing 'Trapped'!)
Jaypallas
2004-03-28 . chapter 26
Great Story!!
I have already read half of the sequell :-)
I'm hoping that sexy Snape has a another chance with Valerie. And I would highly apreciate Lupin and Roary Pairing :-) in future.
Moghedien17
2004-01-31 . chapter 1
Wow. I really liked your story. It was great. I'm about to start Unplottable. Can't wait. Professor Varlerta is a great character
Tuva
2004-01-30 . chapter 26
I love your fic! It's awesome! I finished it a couple of days ago, and I really enjoyed the reading! Your language is great, and you've managed to keep the original touch of the characters in the same time as you've developed your own story! I really like the way you've done with the chapters, with different points of view each time! Great job, I will definatly read more of you! *claps*
Amyli
2003-05-19 . chapter 28
I'm very, very sorry it took me so long to finally finish this. I'm glad I finally found the time, though - because this is undoubtably a masterpiece, any. I bow at your feet. ~_^

Incidentally, /I/ would read a sequel to Subplot, even if it has absolutely nothing to do with OOF. I think you're writing one, too? I'm certainly going to check it out - Subplot had a wonderful ending, but it wasn't exactly the sort of place to stop that leaves you with a happily-ever-after ending and no further questions. Not that that's a bad think - I love sequels.

Reading this has been a great privilege - and probably kept me alive while waiting for OOF. ... That had better be at least as good as Subplot, if that's possible... or JKR will have absolutely no justification for taking as long as she did.

You're amazing, any - keep writing!
Alisa
2003-04-13 . chapter 26
Well, now that was the end. It makes me very sad since your ff was one of the best I´ve ever read. I´m still putting links to it everywhere I´m submitting some pieces of art.
Somehow I liked it very much that Valerie disappeared in the end. Poor Verus, poor Sirius, but I really couldn´t imagine some pink fluffy happy ending with Val and Sirius living happily together and having a lot of cool little children.
Having waist-long hair myself I felt a little pain in the stomach when Ginny cut hers, but if she felt like it... Well, I´m talking a lot of nonsense here, so I´ll finish my review with those words: Will you write a sequel, please? *blink, blink*
Azer
2003-04-10 . chapter 28
Hi, just wanna say that you've definitely got a great storyline going! One critic would probably be that at some points of the story you tend to be a tad long-winded. However, the outcome i still great. =)

I was wondering if you'd be continuing this story?

Azer.
two2blue
2003-04-10 . chapter 26
That's the end? I'm going to cry. This was one of my favorite fics. Valerta was a damn good OC, too. I guess I can only hope your muses force you to write a sequel...(what are Valerta and Roary up to in the US? How's Snape? Does everyone recover?)
a4o
2003-04-09 . chapter 26
What a great story ! You can't stop here though : we need to know what happens next !
Angel of the North
2003-04-09 . chapter 26
And so it ends.

An intriguing story, and interesting that Harry seems able to draw strength where Dumbledore can't. why?

It's as if they're at polar ends of a network.
GoldenWeasley
2003-03-31 . chapter 25
Alright, I have read everything posted from Ch1-25 and all the author notes at the end. I must say, a well developed story to start simply. You plots and jumping around is very tasteful and your doing well to tie up alot of loose ends. Your title isn't doing this story any justuce however, which might explain the lack of reviews thus far. Trust me, I am having the same problem myself. You might want to change the title to reflect the two interesting main plots of this story, something like Sombering Melodies or Frosts Tune. This is a very enriching story and detailed to boot. Keep it up and I hope to see substance on this story soon. Oh, one last thought. You might want to get rid of those to Authors notes pages... its a huge pet peeve of mine to have to click through them... Its always best to acknowledge readers through the e-mail they provide or in a short (emphsis here!) paragraph either at the beginning or end of a chapter. Good Luck
Angel of the North
2003-03-29 . chapter 25
Great Weasley characterisation - especially the percy/molly snobbery thing.

i'm not being lucid, am I?

Snape/Ginny? the rejects club.
Ginny with no hair is interesting as well. It's not icy fingers is it?
Angel of the North
2003-03-21 . chapter 24
Another very cool chapter.
What's the origin of taovetta?

A question - is it enough for them to simply counter the curse, or do they actually have to strengthen the bond between them. So it started to work because of the strength of the bond between Harry and Sirius, and would be further enhanced by Lupin and Ron and Hermione joining in?
And would the curse be stronger if someone with no emotional attachment to the group were to cast it? How come Lupin isn't badly affected, or is that a function of the globe?
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