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Krissilla 2008-07-21 ch 21, anon.	abuseHi! I just wanted to say, I really enjoyed reading your story ^^ Kept me from the world for a couple of hours.The only thing I couldn't stand, was mystic gohan. (makes evil face) Really, I hate that guy. But that's just personal stuff ^^ (actually, I think 'alternate reality DBZ' from youtube influenced me a lot on that point. you should watch it, really funny ^^) anyway, I'm acting all babbly and stuff, so I'm gonna say bye and look for the sequel ^^
SingerOfDoom 2008-02-08 ch 21,	abusethank you so much; that was really good! it put a smile on my face =]
Vetygas Rath 2006-06-16 ch 21,	abuseMan, it's been a while since I last read this! I really did enjoy every last moment of it though! I'm glad I decided to take the time to read through this again because the plot was very original and well thought out! And it was nicely written too! Well, Until Next Time! Sawatdee!
Tsuki Doriimaa 2004-02-22 ch 21,	abuseWOO HOO! That was a great one! Now on to the sequel! ^_~ Take care!
Lexicon Devil 2003-06-07 ch 21,	abuseHi, ok I trust you, I normally hate high school fics, but I ll read your's because I really loved this story, I hope to read more from you soon...
Kahlan Nightwing 2003-06-04 ch 21, anon.	abuseI wish to warn about following in Robert Jordan's footsteps and overdo the whole thing. I really liked the characters also, but you'll have to start into something soon. I don't go for highschool fics. I hated highschool.
Trunksblue 2003-06-04 ch 21,	abuseHey this chapter was great! A little confusing at the parts where they were 'thinking' to eachother but otherwise good. ^_^ You actually have a whole family tree planned out for them? LOL Me and a friend tried doing that once with the X-men but we got confused and scraped it after uh... 5 minutes. Please right more soon! Sayonara!
Cary 2003-06-04 ch 21,	abuseThat's really a great story, I'm glad you continue it! But I think it would be better if you write the sequel as a new story (I know it's the same that adding chapters, but I prefer stories with a single action : this one, the fights against Kakkarot and Borly, and the other one with whatever you've planned...)
Kahlan Nightwing 2003-05-23 ch 20, anon.	abuseVery nice. Was that the end? I know I haven't reviewed in--forever, but I got sidetracked majorly. I have to start updating more regularly too... Well, I liked the fusion part, that was pretty cool. However, what about the relationships besides the whole Vegeta/Goku thing? I mean like Becky and Trunks and Nasu looked pretty cozy too. Just the little things. But I liked the way you ended. Fairy tale endings usually aren't my favorite, but they are okay in this case. Contine writing, I'll continue reading...
Yami Mirai 2003-05-20 ch 20,	abuseCool chapter. I really enjoyed it. Is this the last chapter? If it is,then I just wanna say that this has been a totally awesome fanfic. Ja ne!
The Lost Saiyan 2003-05-19 ch 20,	abuseI loved this chapter and I love the way you write each and every character. Don't stop here, high school awaits :D Please keep writing!
Trunksblue 2003-05-12 ch 19,	abuseYEa!! Brolly's dead! Wo Yea Vegeta and Hito! Awsome Chapter! Please write more son! ^_^
The Lost Saiyan 2003-05-12 ch 19,	abuseHOORAY! This chapter was off the chain! Peace at last. I hope you write at least one more chapter of Vegeta being a teenager with Goten and Trunks. I love reading chapters with everyone just hanging out and doing everyday things. Excellent fic!
Lexicon Devil 2003-05-12 ch 19,	abuseWas that the end? I hope not, but if it was you would ve found a good place to stop, as all evil seems to be defeated, everyone except for maybe Chi Chi is happy after al,... I like the fact that Vegeta defeated Brolly not with one of his moves but with the Spirit bomb...Don t know whygrins I hope to read more from you soon-
Yami Mirai 2003-05-12 ch 19,	abuseCool way to end the story. Is it the end? Or is there another chapter? Either way,I really enjoyed reading it. Ja ne!

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