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| Xtreme Nuisance 2005-06-12 ch 5, | abuseha. I'm reading it again. bbl~! |
| babymar-mar 2004-07-21 ch 14, anon. | abuseok i dont remember if i reviewed this even though i read it twice so if i didnt im sorry and i luu-uuv it!!plz write more |
| Xtreme Nuisance 2004-07-05 ch 9, | abusebbl~! |
| ThePinkFrogsAreComing 2003-08-27 ch 14, | abuseI like this, the charectors were not ooc at ALL.Totally believable.I REALLY liked it. go MAKO/SCHU!! |
| Lin 2003-04-04 ch 14, anon. | abuseThis is probably one of the darkest stories I've ever continued to read. The twisted perverseness presented by Schuldig is quite believable. Also, I could see Makoto breaking under his dreadful manipulation. To be honest, Schuldig is not my favorite Schwarz member. I am definitely a Nagi and Crawford kind of gal. However, the eventual pairing of the two ends up being very believable in my opinion. The eventual revelation of Schuldig's softer feelings are revealed at a nice slow pace, as are Makoto's eventual admissions. I turned to this story after seeing your original story entitled "Blood and Thunder." I wanted to understand what the connect was between the two stories. However, at the beginning of Schwarz Blitz I was really against what was going on. I felt disturbed by just how violent things were getting. BUT! I was also morbidly fascinated by what was being written and continued to read it. Then around the middle, I began to appreciate Makoto's mind set further and moved from morbidly fascinated to curious. I kept wondering what situation Makoto would be placed in next. What kind of warped game would Schuldig play on Makoto next. Then towards the end I found situations wrapped up in agreeable ways -- with the exception of one instance, but I don't think it's that worth mentioning since I liked this story over all. ^_^ Should you eventually put up the WK/SM crossover again ("Blood and Thunder), you can be sure I'll be reading it. Sure, I'm disappointed it's not here now, but I am also anticipating it's return on day. ~_^ Ja ne! |
| aquamoongemini 2003-03-08 ch 14, | abuseholy crap!! this was damn good! I loved how you used some German. Anywayz it was a tight fic. Damn this was good. g2g cya l8er |
| Suki issunsakihayami 2003-01-18 ch 11, | abuseJust wanted to drop a quick line to tell you how much i liked your story. It was one of my first crossovers i ever read with the Schwarz in it and was by far my favorite. Keep up the good work! |
| MiLeggie 2002-12-30 ch 14, | abuseThis is the first fic ive ever read with these two shows in a crossover. Ive actually never seen anything or read anything about Weiss Kreuz in my life b4, but i have heard a few things about it.. I started looking up some info on the show and characters a few days ago, b4 i read this. Im happy i read this. It was very good! I loved it! Hope ya have a happy New Year! |
| Mt. Dew Whore 2002-12-25 ch 14, | abuseo WOW! I spent like... 3 hours reading this, non stop. It's really great, I mean... WHOA... At first I was like 'oh it won't be as intrigueing as some that I've read' then I was like 'wait a minute... never judge a book by it's cover, rite?' so I read it and I got pulled into it and couldn't stop. From like..9 to 11:54 this very instant... lol. Yeah, it's great, I'm adding it to my favorites! I hope I can read the rest of your stories, but I'll read tomorrow. I'm gonna go SLEEP! JA NE! Oh.... P.S. ^_^;; Are you gonna make a sequal? Or have you already? Hehe... J/W.. If you are let me know!! ~*AnimePrincess*~ ~*Arika Morance*~ |
| Chibi-chan24 2002-12-13 ch 14, | abuseOhh!!!I loved it!!You gotta write a sequal or even more stories like this! I love Makoto and the way you wrote about Schwarz. I can't find any of those!^.~ |
| Kourui 2002-12-09 ch 14, | abuseWow...that was wonderful Mako-chan! Your stories are so better than mine. The details surpasses my one greatly and the plot is well done! You are definetly one of my favorite Authors! Always Your Fan Keiko ^_^ P.s. half way done with Chapter three of Love Hurts if your interested and a quarter done with the new story and you inspired me to write a Schwarz/Sailor moon fic. I don't know when that will be out though ^_^;; You did a wonderful job Mako I can't wait until your next story! |
| Kourui not signed in 2002-12-08 ch 9, anon. | abuseAlright here comes the action! Well you did have action in the earlier chapters but it should be more intense now right? Or am I wrong? O_o hehehe. Anyway, I enjoyed this and I would continue reading right now but I have work in an hour and I havn't changed to my working close yet ^_^;; All those homeworks! I'll be glad when break comes. ::Sighs:: what a wonderful word break is. ^_^ Oh thank you for the email. I haven't had time to reply you back! I'm sorry! When I'm done with the first chapter or half way there I'll e-mail it to you and you can see if I need to change something or all of it. If you want too. You'll be seeing more reviews from me! ^__________^ Great job as always, Keiko |
| mako-chan fan 2002-12-06 ch 14, anon. | abusewhoa... it's finally finished, huh? congrats... anyway... yeah... i'll be updating my site pretty soon, so uhh.. yeah.... |
| Akan 2002-12-05 ch 14, anon. | abuseLoved it! ^_^ One of the best Mako stories I've read so far. And it was orignal! Oh god! ::praises:: ^_^; |
| Kourui not signed in 2002-12-05 ch 8, anon. | abuseHahaha! That was funny. They make a cute couple! Hey I was wondering when will they even have a slight romantic scene? Just wondering. I like like this chapter a lot Makoto. You always capture my attention. I wish I can read more right now, but I have school to go to but I will come back! ^_^ Thank you for the help. I will be emailing you soon! Bye!!! |