interesting

I just saw this. I could not read it untill today, I'm still in Sarnia. But I'll soon be back...oh, this is a COOL story! I like how the way you work in the characters...both new and used. And how do you come up with names for magical abilities? Oh, some M:TG thrown in as well? Cool. What next? Heroes of the Lance? Or maybe one of my Ya'a Naomi? KEEP UP THE WORK SIMON AND LO'ISE!

I'll see you all soon,

Ra'akone

PS to all those reading this review...read this story, and all the parts that come before!

See you,

Ra'akone

Good second part. You're really good at this, Simon and Lo'ise!

Yes, I'm enjoying the story. And I like the names of the "special attacks".

hmm...as for ideas? Maybe either a "Ya'a Naomi" or a talking cat somewhere? And maybe Fly and Lotus might enter an "Anything Goes" tournament? Maybe a sighting of a mysterious dark figure? These are just ideas.

See ya,

Ra'akone

Your story was really Good, i think you should keep up the "great" work!

I happen to know the geniuses (the author and editor) behind this piece, but that's besides the point. Very Well done. This your first fanfic here? Best of luck in them, and wish me luck with mine! This is very funny. I can't wait untill chapter 2!

Now that I finally found the story and got to read it your getting the review. Don't hate me if you don't apperciate my comment. It's a good story. It's got a good beginning to a good story. Keep it comming.

yes it was very good. But what happens next?

tell me when the next bit is up please