Hi... When are you going to finishing editing this story so we can read it?
JG

Hey where's the story? Are you going to put it here again? Please...

HEY, JUST WONDERING IF YOU ARE GONNA FINISH THIS,, I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS AND IT'S BEEN QUITE A WHILE SINCE YOU UPDATED. HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!~THANKS~

hey,
i love your story you are very tallented!

I have really enjoyed this! You are very imaginative in the way you turn the plotlines from Season 2 to your own advantage, and you write well. I can hardly wait to see where this ends up.

Argh. Argh. Can't say much more except: POST THE NEXT CHAPTER! NOW!

No, really, that's so mean. I was really thinking I'd get my M/L reunion anytime soon, but now it doesn't look like it at all.

Argh.

Just finished reading today and can I say that I love the different path you've taken with Season 2! . . . Syl and Krit staying in touch with Logan, Syl seriously keeping Asha away (which, until this story, I hadn't realized how much Asha annoyed me . . . I kinda feel like Syl in that respect :), and there's no pesky virus to worry about . . . Woo Hoo! . . . lol . . . Anyway, I'm totally looking forward to more, so post more soon please? . . .

damnit! she was so close! love the twists, even though they are evil... *mutters* like bling being more than "something came for you logan" and "i'm going to the market, want anything?".
keep it up and UPDATE SOON! :):)

Great action. Ames is up to his old games again - scheming against his own superior. And Logan trying to pin down Wiley Coyote Deck. Great stuff. Just don't leave it so long, next time, hm?

FFNet won't let me sign in so you get the cheap version this time... heh heh...

So Logan suspects that Max may be alive AND that Lydecker is up to something. Good to know he's still playing the hardball version of the game. I can't help wondering if dear ol' Deck realizes just what kind of a man Logan Cale really is?

I like how you had Max set up previously, returning home triumphantly to see Logan, sure of herself and her place in the world (well, to a degree at least) only to have it ripped out from under her. True to the dark nature of the show.

The smugness you are showing in Amy's character here leads me to believe that Max is going to humiliate him in front of Thula... can't help thinking that. I fully expect Thula to be around when Max catches her moment and shines all over Amy and his cronies.

Another good chapter here. High marks for covering the bases with Max and Logan. And first prize here for centering on Max and Logan! As I've said before... like what you've got going here and can't wait for the next chapter.

Hey,
Good to know you are back. Keep going. I'm looking forward to read the next.
thanks.

Oh,this is good...the tension sure is building.

I like the synchronicity of having both Logan and Max on the run at the same time - exposed, and, to some extent, vulnerable.

Keep it coming.

Whoa... wonderful, twisting story. Keep it comin' girl, and I'll never stop reading it... you're on my fav's now ;)

i love it! please don't leave us hangin for as long as you did last time... keep i tup :)

i love it! the twist are great! keep it up :)