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Reviews for: Bruises and Broken Spirits
Lizabeth Grey
2009-10-14 . chapter 1
This story was totally sweet! Very natural characterization.
KJS
2006-01-10 . chapter 1
I know you wrote this a long time ago... but I just had to review. I really LOVE this story. The dialogue between Anya and Giles was just wonderful. So often I see OOC dialogue between the two in 'fic, it was so refreshing to see something believable and a voice for Anya that just seemed perfect.

The lines about Anya not being a true friend of the Scoobies, her comment about a wedding requiring vows... Those sections both just got me, they were great. And the ending? Perfect. I'll admit I squealed a bit when Giles left the nurse believe that Anya was his wife and I definitely got a very warm fuzzy feeling by the end. This was just a wonderful story, it made my night.
xanya-forever
2004-01-04 . chapter 1
hey "feedback-aholic" I know how you feel! Anyway, great fic. Of course, I love xanya the most, but I'm not against ganya, especially if it's in friendship, which this mostly was. You wrote them both very well, and you actually took into account Anya's feelings, which all too many writers ignore (arg) so I commend you! It could definitely have a sequel, but it's also just fine on its own. Lovely work!
Jenny Giles
2003-05-13 . chapter 1
Terrific story. You should continue, I think you could make it a great series. But if not, it's perfect on its own, too!
ThatGirl
2002-10-25 . chapter 1
I thought I had read all of your strories, but it seems I missed this one!

I'm a secret G/A shipper, so I loved this story and would like to read more. Maybe Anya could take a vacation to England and run into dear old Rupert?

Jeri
demongrl201
2002-10-11 . chapter 1
hey I loved the story! great a/g relationship. maybe you could add another chapter?? :) or write another g/a story :)
PenguinsEvilPawn
2002-10-11 . chapter 1
I loved this story. I think they would be a sweet couple. I really hated all that they did to Anya on the show. It seems just wrong. Well, anyway, did you consider writing another chapter or a sequel. Ya know the morning after; one of the Scoobies could find them. This is just a suggestion. Well loved it.
velvetsushi
2002-10-10 . chapter 1
+ Original
+ Some of the dialogue was great
+ I like the title

- Sometimes Anya and Giles didn't quit sound like themselves, especially Giles.
- Maybe a bit rushed?

6.5/10
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