love it

wel this story is turning out very interesting!
I like your point, this is your atory after all.
Also, i think there are many things very fresh and good about it. I think you make the little-brother-growing-up kick-ass-ly! All around the family feel very real; the characters are so very humanized, with some or other things in variations and little details.
As in literature recourses, i like the order you give in the chapter. First, a short unpersonal description, almost as a paser-by, i think it brings you inside the story. Then there's Kagome's part, very distinct form the story mood but it's slowly sumerging in. Sesshoumaru's part is the perfect fit for a power freak and a low world villian...or however you prefer to call it.

I like this a lot. I can't wait to the next chapter. At least I know Inuyasha is the same. Update when you can.

is kagome going to kick some ass hehehe any ways keep up the great work i hope you update soon ^_^

Oh noes, Hakuyoukai! ...I'd say I hope he doesn't have Kagome with him when he gets ambushed, but I'm pretty sure he will :P

'His trained ears were alert, eyes focused keenly on the katana-clad pair of crossed legs.'
I don't really get that sentence.. A katana is a japanese sword, right? Maybe you meant a hakama?
I don't know xD

See you next chapter! :3

Gah, Kikyou's so rude! :O
Heehee, Kagome's turning Sesshoumaru into a softie ;]

Ooh, Inuyasha with dreadlocks!
I like >:3

:) Please update. We're dying here.

Yo this is such a good story D. I love stories that include gangs. love the story update soon

i really liked this story!
you should keep writing n keep it going
i like sesshomaru's character he is so strong n angelic :-D
n kagome is so sweet funny n innocent :-D
it's all too cute 'specially since inuyasha is here!

This is a good story. You haven't updated this story in years. Please Update!

you hadn't update since a really really long time... Will you update soon?
Your story is really great and I can't to read more... You hadn't put a new chapter since like forever, but I'd still hope that you will update in a near future...I really hope so.
please please update really soon, I'm begging you!

why don't you have Kagome save Seshomaru? then maybe his impression of her will be improved. not that he'll show it though

Olala...NICE!Keep on writting!I wanna read the 11th chap!You have lotsa talent,girl!

This is very interesting... It makes me wonder and with all the lovely plot twists, you certainly keep my interest. I look forward to the next installment.