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| Macross-Green 2004-10-27 ch 2, | abuseNot a bad beginning. A bit sparse on the details and you've added a few things here and there, but overall, pretty good. |
| JP McClendon 2002-11-17 ch 1, | abuseThe Movie was indeed dreadful. I happen to like Prophecy. True, it didn't have the depth of III or IV, but it was good nonetheless. What I think it tried to accomplish was the changing of the guard. But anyway, I respect anyone who is writing in this category, and it is a good thing I suggested this category to ff.net in the first place. I must say that I am interested in seeing how you plan to retell the Kilrathi Saga, but I do wonder why you plan to retell the Kilrathi Saga? Do you have problems with the story as it exists? |
| Deathworm 2002-10-31 ch 1, | abuseI read your summary. It's a GREAT idea. But I think you should put more stuff into the beginning. I'm sure there's tons of stuff about Wing Commander that'll make this story an even greater re-telling of the 40-year Kilrathi War. You took the later 20 years (the more exciting ones) so I know I'll see good stuff soon. Review my work if you have time. Thanks |