WOW! I love it! It really fits in well with the story - speaking of, you'd be happy to know that there is now an Into the Woods section under Misc. This is great - it's going on my favorites (as if I don't have enough favorites already.) You should write more of these wonderful stories and tell all your Into the Woods fanfiction friends that there is now a section for it! Keep the good work up!

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This is a brilliantly written piece! I love how you capture the Witch's power and personality but then add the little bit of personality you don't see in the play. The added reason for wanting to become beautiful, despite the knowledge that she may lose her powers really sort of... 'clinched it' I guess, in that it isn't just a crazy woman ordering a Baker and his Wife around the woods.

Perfect. Beautifully in character. It's so lovely to find Into the Woods fiction. :) Long live Sondheim!

Wow. This was really just...*sob*...beautiful. One of my best friends was the Witch in Into the Woods (and I was Cinderella)and I could totally hear her singing "Ever After" in my head. Thank you so much for writing this. I'm putting it on my faves list.

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I like how you had the part of the witch and the prince, seems likly to happen. Great story you captured her well.

Cool!

Excellent piece you have here. It made me think of some things I hadn't seen in the witch before. Just a bit of greed, perhaps?

*"Our Little World" plays persistently in head*

wow, that was really, really good. so perfectly in-character but at the same adds so much to that character! i'm really impressed, in all the time i spent working tech for that show i never bothered to give some of the characters as much thought as you have here, i'd love to see what you have to say about others.

excellent job!

I think you have a neat style of writing- very expressive. Although I see you aren't going to write anymore on this story, i wish you would write something else for me to read, because I enjoy your writing.

I loved how you captured the Witch's character in this.

Also, the little refrences to some of her songs was a nice touch.

"Needing more mollification, I also set a curse on the baker’s family." Very nice.

Hello, I am an "Into the Woods freak..." seriously. It's my favorite musical, and I loved this short story... it practically kept "the beat," even though it wasn't a song!

I really like how you made the witch seem even more likable.

Quee, I love this. Bernadette Peter's has me in tears singing "Children Don't Listen" in the second act. You did a wonderful job of capturing that.

Wow! This was awesome! The witch is my favorite character and I could almost hear Bernadette Peters saying this in her head. Very passionate. I like how you incorperated the vocabulary from the play.