wow a really good first chapter
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Omgh! I loved your story! Fantastic job! Sequal!

It is 2:37 AM, and I have finished reading "In Wonderland" and "Fall." Thank you very much for two excellent pieces of writing~ very original and great imagery! I plan to read "Through the Looking Glass" tomorrow. =]

AWE! I loved it!

Raine

Wow...that was just...jaw dropping material. I really got the chills when she started reciting. This story is put together very well. Don't listen to any flamers, if you got/get any. : )

You gave me the MAJOR goosebumps! So far, I've recognized Alice in Wonderland and the Bible...correct me if I'm wrong. This is an awesome story, and I can't wait to read the rest of it! Onto the next chapter, I say!

I really don't know if I like this sort of ending better then if she would've died and came back to earth... Either way people would get hurt. (What happened to Alicia's parents? Did they die without ever knowing what happened to their daughter?)

Amazing, but sad, story.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! SHE THREW UP ON HIM! freakin' awesome...definately NOT a typical legomance! glad i clicked on this one! :)

Hey, it's me!
Ok, first order of business: THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for giving your charcters faults! Alright, so it was pretty Mary Sue, but I've read much worse and not much better.
Have a super-sized bar of e-chocolate from me. ;)

I've only read a few chapters of your wonderful story, but you've got me hooked. Ok, so your main character is a little Mar-sueish, which I normaly don't like. But she's not too bad, and her reaction is a much more realistic than most OFC stories. I usually don't like Legomances either, but again, if it's realistic and convincing, then I don't mind too much. Your writing is excellent, by the way! I'll probably comment more as I read further, but for now, good job!

a very enjoyable story. one of the best Lord of the Rings stories i've come across. please update your sequel soon!

[I love the 'A Wrinkle in Time series'.] This is such a beautifully written story. The weaving together of the nursery rhymes and poems, the 'Alice in Wonderland' themes, and the world of Tolkien is amazing.

ce manufique! very good! if a little sad, i'd say sequel

I feel so bad for Legolas. poor Karalynn. Trapped in a childs mind? The story is amzing and very bitter sweet! I must say I will always remember it in that wistful kind of way, but I will seek happier endings. Although what really is a happy ending anyway, the main characters live and are together, but not in their right mind? Is it worse to get old and die or is it worse to lose your very mind? It ties in with the actual LOTR plot line very well. YOu have a talent for imagery, the Alice in wonderland was disturbingly brillant. Although ALice is a a book that leads people to thinka nd often to feel a little creeped out eh? Good luck with all that you do!

It's so sad. I think this is just about the best OC story/Legomance I've ever read. It's wonderful~