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Reviews for: THE OUTSIDERS: Book II 'Fortuna's Champion'
Elana
2007-01-11 . chapter 18
In the sense of a well written story it was great. But,... there was way to much pain in this story. I dont like how it ended with Eve!I thought the whole story way to evil. I hated this storie!(In a good way. I hated what you put the characters through.)
aserene
2006-12-21 . chapter 18
that was the best story ever!! You really had me going thinking Ares was going to leave Xena and they would all just die but i'm so glad it turned out this way!! I really liked this story! Great job!
Bolls.
2006-08-02 . chapter 18
That was amazing, i really enjoyed reading this. You captured all the characters perfectly =] it was awsome. x
Gryffindor620
2006-06-16 . chapter 18
I love this story!! I love it love it!! The only thing I want is a continuation or a one-shot with Ares and Xena.
This story was awesome!!
Great Chapter!!
Update Soon Son!!
Jade of Purple
2005-01-07 . chapter 18
I loved it, both the first part and the second one. I really beleive that you're a great writer. Keep the stories coming.
LadyKate1
2003-11-22 . chapter 18
What a wonderful work. Beautifully written (the descriptions are vivid but never excessive), with great dialogue and excellent characterization. The Xena/Ares relationship is in some ways better than it was on the show in Season 5, and Livia finally becomes a fully three-dimensional character whose redemption makes sense. Even the minor characters such as Athena are memorable and real.

Outstanding.
Tali-Sarah
2003-11-22 . chapter 18
One word, wow! Your hard work and time have paid off and the final result is a piece of fiction that you should be utterly proud of.
fymhrisfawr
2003-03-29 . chapter 5
Oh please, update soon. Even if it's just one chapter. I know there's a lot of work elsewhere going on (shipper season 8 and all). But you can't let it stay like this. I hope.
LadyKate1
2002-10-24 . chapter 1
Absolutely wonderful -- a must-read not only for Xena/Ares fans but for anyone who likes a well-written story. Waiting impatiently for the next part. :-)
Sandra
2002-10-24 . chapter 1
I love it!!! I love it!!! I love it!!!
Please continue the story as soon as possible.
Sondrin
2002-10-23 . chapter 2
What can I say... the story is excellent.I like it even better than book 1. Please update it as fast as you can.
Nicole
2002-10-23 . chapter 1
I absolutely love this story!!! Please write more.
Sal2
2002-10-20 . chapter 3
I've only read half of it so far, but I'm loving every part of it! It's an excellent tale with everything I love--drama, adventure, and of course romance.
Anja
2002-10-16 . chapter 5
Tango, this was worth all the months of waiting!!! It's BEUTIFUL. I long to read more, and I' sure so do others. Please please continue this wonderful story. My words are too humble to describe it - all I can say is WOW.
I'll be checking back for future chapters, be sure of that!
carly
2002-10-14 . chapter 5
What can I say except I love this story . . . it moves me everytime I read it, every part it wonderful.
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