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Ao-Senshi
2004-09-07 . chapter 9
Uhm, I thought this thing ended years ago...I was surprised to see it sudden;y at the top of the list. Nice chapter there though thata last part "Of course, Ryo's my angel"...that was really corny. No offense. Funny chatper also and glad you didn't make them kiss. Too much people do that when theres too little detail >_
RikaTabithaStarr
2004-09-04 . chapter 9
i was really surprised when you updated this, after all i thought it ended.. but i really like the new chapter you put it. it must be rare for the tamers to see ruki in a dress/skirt.
Deej
2004-09-04 . chapter 9
BoO! Did I scare you now? Well anyway. Obviously I got your e-mail and now I'm reviewing. You're so lame and mean, loserface. Ryo's my angel, come on. I agree corny, considering that line was very uncalled for. Ryo's bit where he stops Rika, not very guy-like. Too much info on Ryo's part. The chapters before it are very skinny, so it's a good thing you're planning on revising. Good luck with H. Frances and I'll talk to you later. Schmoogly woogly!
Ao-Senshi
2004-07-03 . chapter 8
Hey cool story but kinda short. But still cool. Its fast though
muses let loose
2004-06-13 . chapter 8
cute ending but i think that they should of kiss on the lips.but i still think this is a cool ending.
dunno what happen
2004-06-12 . chapter 8
Aw...Very cute ending.but i thry should of kiss on the lips.oh well still luv ending.
SilverRainbow223
2004-04-20 . chapter 8
That was a good story. I liked the ending, though you could do something more with the story like an epilouge or something. I don't know, it just could be more. But it was a good story.
Dark Iced Princess
2003-10-31 . chapter 8
This was a really good story I enjoyed reading it! Well writen!
Kaiba Lover
2003-08-08 . chapter 8
Very OCC. I don't think Rika would ever really do that.
borderline
2003-05-25 . chapter 7
hi I'm Ashley's friend who is just too lazy too log in. she told me about your stories a while back but i havent had the chance to be on the internet for more than checking my email in a LONG time.any ways cool story but i think you need more cliff hangers, althoug i realy do hate them, to keep readers wanting more. heres somethin scary though: in the past two days i have read 2 stories where rika is almost road kill. any ways g2g (its my "baby" bro's b day and its time for cake. m... funfetti! wicked cool cya !
punkofice
2003-04-19 . chapter 3
update well... i mean ur other fics lol
punkofice
2003-04-19 . chapter 2
uhh how interesting
punkofice
2003-04-19 . chapter 1
yo remember me? lol. good chappie. thanks for reviewin for mine. your fic is awsome. this is *counts* the 4 time i read it
starz
2003-03-28 . chapter 8
nice story !
Nekura Ikeike
2003-01-04 . chapter 8
That was a really sweet fanfic. Hope I can find more like this one. It was really good. Keep it up.~_~
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