This is a very sweet story. Really cute.

Aww. That's so cute. I like it alot. ^.^

aww thats really cute...

This is so cute I love it!! :):)
(Note: I don't think it's rated R, though.) Oh well! Anyways, I love this, it is so adorable!! I could really picture Minako-chan daydreaming about something like that.
Anyways, Ja!
J.A.

Lovely, simply lovely. I'm serious, it was really pretty. I like it!

That was a wonderful story! I really liked it.

Next time don't be afraid to put all of the chapters together. It's a short enough story to put into one shot. Doing that would also help the continuity of the story. It kinda interrupts the flow when you have to change the page.

Other than that the story was great. No one really ever goes in depth into Minako's thoughts and personality. It's refreshing to read about her more.

Keep up the great work!

Awwwww.... that was soo darn cute! put up sommore!

The style the fic is written in reminds me of a diary. I like the fic, it's nice, happy and sunny, just like Minako!^_^
Random thought: "Sorry!" says Hohiko, "I didn't mean to scare you! What's for lunch?"
"You!" I say, and I grab his face with my hands and envelope him in a deep kiss.
I just think that Minako is the type of person who would say something just like that.