I feel bad for Ollie, but I'm glad that Dinah found happiness with Bruce. She deserves it after everything Ollie put her through.

Great fic. :)

oo Lian is so cute :)) I love your story

/Does it ever seem like our lives are one giant soap opera?/

*snort* Truer words have never been spoken. A nice, slightly angsty, somewhat lighthearted look at what might have happened in this case. Thanks for writing.

You asked for feedback.

If you'll pardon the pun, you hit a bullseye with this one. The relationships and characters were spot on, Roy reacted just as he should (and so did Ollie!) and the story flowed exactly the way I would have expected if the "official" writers had written this. I think it was very near flawless, and frankly, it was a all-around good read.

Tracey

Well written although some stuff seemed a bit unlikely; a stripper blushing? Ollie hitting Bruce and succeeding? Dick getting drunk in the presence of Bruce?