omg this was awsome i've read it all too bad it ended i would have liked to read more more and more :P

normally it would take me a couple of hours to finish a fic with this many chapters however i was very long this fic took up an entire week and i dont regret a single day of it the amount of character development and story just kept me enthralled throughout i very much hope to see more of your work because if its anything like this ill make sure to take some time of work to fully engross myself in the story

I think aside from it's grammatical, and spelling errors this is an amazing story with great potential.

very interesting you seem to be developing quite the thick and juicy plot! so many new threats on the horizon what will our heros do? find out next time on...

love it

Wow. I LOVED this story, and just about threw a fit when the site vanished off my favorite's list. I can't tell you how happy I am to find this fic here, where I can read it over and over again. Just like old times. XD

just re-reading this story remembering how much I love it.

I love Second Coming, this is my second review and second time reading through this story, but I can't help to notice that there seems to be a chapter missing here. Part 3 Chapter 4 I believe. If there isn't, WOW! Did I miss something O_o;; If you ever read this, or have the time, can you please post it, or send it to me, or tell me where I can find it? I know you haven't updated in well over a year or so, but I would really like to read the chapter. You put so much information into each chapter, and missing one means missing out on alot, yano? Anyways, thank you for writing such a wonderful story and please help me!

*~~Betsy~~*

i wonder if goma and trunks will get backj to earth in time to stop freza f rom destroying it and waht about bulma and vegeta. will vegeta ever get bulma back or will they be forever seperated.i hopw bulma remembers ho vegeta is and gos agains tulus.i hope vegeta and goma can find bulma.

i hope however wants to capsfure b ulmas soul dosnt succed.ii hope trunks and goima are able to stope the being ho wants to capsure blmas soul wich i thin would hurt vegeta even more.

that was a good chapter goma rescued trunks altho i dont relly get how he humeleated the prencess was very efecticve, i thought he was going to blow off her womenhood.vegeta he is in relly bad shape he has already tryed to kill himselfby ffreezing himself too death wich at the biggining he said he would never kill himself for that was the cowerdes way out. i gus bulmas death has relly messed him up.

i wonder how trunks will get out of the fix he is in right now wil goma be able to help him. too mount a rescue.i wonder what trunks will do whene he gets free.what about vegeta whats he going too do in the next chapter.

i like this chapter what a good story.i liked the part were gome was deseving trunks eys.making him belive he was and old perverted man. also i wonder what loylty gomas family has to the vegeta family and why.this is one of the best and longest stores iv red so far on ff.net

very good chapter i wonder how powerfull the women is compaired to trunks.i vagly tremember this story nut so far its relly relly good.keap up the good work.

very good chapter nice and lonmg just the way i like theme. i think its good that vegeta is ecploring the univers also trunks i wonder what trouble amd powerts they will both find .what level of ssj will they reach . will trunks vegeta and goku train at all whene they are in space. what did the guy mean whne he said that the bond will bring her too you and you will bring her too me and than i will sever the bond beatwean you.how can this guy posibly sever a saiyan bond.good story keap up the good work.