Absolutely brilliant. I know now why you are the pioneer of Lufia fanfiction. Let this be my first...to call you a pioneer. A perfect portrayal of Lufia once dual identity. It is one method of putting to rest a fear I took with me after playing that game. I remember all too well the night I complete the game. I could barely sleep, and, if you can believe it, played through the game again just to see if maybe the ending would be different. Your portrayal of the characters was dead on. I hope someday the game is re-released somewhere. And your writing style and technique are excellent, even with a few minor, quite forgiveable grammatical flubs. I hope you will take up writing again.

Wow. I think it's safe to say that I'm speechless.
I think you really do have an amazing talent. Your descriptions were insightful, not droning on and on and your pictures of the characters were accurate. It was totally amazing. The plot, of course, is interesting on its own and you pulled off the ending with a certain flair. Not only that, but you had the basics- such as grammer, spelling, etc- covered as well. It's really a surprise to see an author that can not only write well but writes correctly.
Like I said... wow. I really enjoyed this fic. Believe me when I say you're one of the best authors I've ever seen.
~Lalita

Sucker for the happy endings eh? ;) I remember reading this some time ago on another site, forget which though. Still a great story.

Awwww...I loved it. I read this awhile ago on another site, so I just had to read it again.