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| Scarabeye3000 2004-06-29 ch 1, | abuseNice one... but still lemons are the ones I only didn't originally do. I admit Scarab Eye is a bad man. But that doesn't make me like him. Also the fic Bad Shinji was given to me by Scarab Eye because of also being a Filipino he handed it over to me. And lemons he's not good at it, but he's good at series fic. Don't you think? |
| ShardclawKusanagi 2003-08-29 ch 13, | abuseNO, NO, NO, this is an nightmare unimaginable! You CAN'T just leave one of the greatest fics EVER one FF.net! It's just not right, I tell you! (Cries rivers of tears...)It's because of your fic, I'm able to get my own EVA/MGS fic as good as it is! You write so well in the story and the suspense is too much to handle that I want more! But, why,oh why did this had to happen? I had an idea that this had to happen... Well, I guess the responsibility to entertain the masses with my fics goes to me and me alone, right? This is just great... However, thanks to your fic, I've been inspired to focus more on 'COE, now that your fic has been discontinued. But, I'll consider continuing it soon, but not now, I doubt and probably in not the same style like yours, even though it's probably different and better than mine. (or is it the other way around?) I do hope you haven't totally turned your back on this amazing story, PLEASE consider continuing it whenever you're not too busy and things don't get in your way. I wish you the best of luck and hopefully, that you can give me some advice of what I'm doing wrong in my fic. Laters. Yours Truly, the Kusanagi Flame, Shardclaw. |
| ShardclawKusanagi 2003-04-22 ch 12, | abuseAbout Freaking time! Guess this Chapter was worth the wait,huh? So,does this means that Snake will have to fight this Ninja as he did in Shadow Moses or something else is in store? I can't wait! Oh, I would even like to see Snake finally meet Shinji and give him more encouragement,like Kaji did in Chapter 10. Keep up the great work,my friend. This is gound to be classic. |
| Grey Wolf4 2003-04-21 ch 12, | abuseThis is getting interesting! Keep it up! I would like to see a conversation between Shinji and Snake in which he tells Shinji what Grey Fox told him "We're not tools of the government or anyone else, fighting was the only, the only thing I was good at. At least I always fought for what I believed in" Anyway looking forward to the next chapter! |
| ShardclawKusanagi 2003-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis crossover just gets better and better! The return of FOXDIE and a Kaworu cameo... not to mention your research on how 3rd impact can be initiated,it was most needed,that I could'nt hold myself together while reading this chapter. Please keep the rewrites coming and please hurry up with Chapter 12 and those to follow. Personal request:Please have Snake confront that bastard Ikari MGS style! |
| Grey Wolf4 2003-01-20 ch 11, | abuseThis is getting very, very interesting. Was it FOXDIE that killed Ritsuko? Or something similar? If so, who else is included in the program. Either way I can't wait until chapter 12! This is a brilliant crossover! |
| Collis Parris 2003-01-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseIt's me again.I've read the re-writes of Chapters 1 and 2 and it's made me enjoyed this crossover even more.I hope to see more of this in the future as more details has been added into the story, making it more enjoyable.I hope to see Chapter 11 soon,as well as Snake interacting with the Eva characters,(Please Shinji,Misato or Rei). |
| Grey Wolf4 2002-12-16 ch 10, | abuseThis is going great! Keep it up! I look forward to how it all turns out! Is Liquid really alive?! |
| Collis Parris 2002-12-07 ch 10, anon. | abuseSince the day I fell in love with MGS and Evangelion,I prayed for a crossover between the two most coolest creations made by the land of the rising sun.Now,God has answered our prayers.This is the most coolest,greatest,x-over I've ever seen!I'd liked how Snake was able to survive against Unit-2,but please make him like really smart enough to go up against the JSSDF!One man- against an army like that(sigh)is no problem for Snake.Needs more MGS cameos too. |
| Raven11 2002-11-24 ch 10, | abuseAlright! Liquid is in this! I wonder if you are going to use the official story from MGS2 and bring in Revolver Ocelot or just have Liquid alive and well. I also hope that this means that Solidus will make an apperance as well. |
| Grey Wolf4 2002-11-20 ch 9, | abuseThis is a great fiction! A marvellous crossover! One of the best I have ever seen! Are there going to be any pairings! Please Snake/Misato! |
| Neokenxtreme 2002-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey...Nice fanfic. Needs more action, but I could tell you did your research. That's really all I need to say. -You should know who I am |
| Deathangel 2002-11-05 ch 8, anon. | abusePretty cool!! I can't wait for the next installment of MGS:A!! I've got to know....did a new transfer system come up? Where's Ritsuko? Is Snake going to go through yet another terrifyingly torturous torture scene? WILL HE PRESS SELECT?!!!Please finish soon! P.S....I've played and beaten MGS,but I'm writing a fanfiction of my own, and can't remember exactly what happened to the "fake" DARPA Chief.....Was that Foxdie? What the imposter's name? I know I could probably get the info. from a site, but...well, let's just say that this is more convenient....I mean,if you know,that is. Sorry if you don't know...but if you do,then please tell me!! My E-mail's down right now, so if you could answer in the next chapter, it would be great!...Thanks! |
| Autophage 2002-11-02 ch 8, | abuseI've never played a single Metal Gear Game in my entire life, and have only had the privelage of seeing Solid Snake in action when my friends played, so my knowledge of the series is vague and pathetic. When a buddy of mine only recently showed me the first in the Metal Gear Solid series, I was shocked to discover how much it was like your fic! So many consistencies! Your fic was like a true parallel universe. You make Snake out to be so IC, it's incredible! I have to give you Kudos on the intricate detail in explaining the action sequences, the gear, and weapons. They all fit together in such a satisfying way. It also gives a feel to reality, in terms of sneak-around espionage, and not gun toting, shell flying, Arnold Schwarzenegger style gun battling. Well done! |
| Steel Jaguar 2002-10-30 ch 7, | abuseI tried a crossover of Evangelion and Metal Gear Solid after watching the initial invasion of NERV in EoE. But I found that my work sucked, so I abandoned it. You on the other hand, this is a lot better than what I first conceived. My only complaint is that Snake seems a little too stupid for his own good (he's actually rather intelligent in the ways of military technologies and Metal Gears, but not enough to be a full-fledged military analyst). I mean, "I don't even know what Bakelite is, but it already sounds bad!" Snake just sounds like your average gun-toting freak sent on a gov't mission for no reason (think the movie 'XXX'). The codec crew on the other hand, seems quite competent, and is comparable to the original codec crew in MGS. I'm a little disappointed to see only Otacon in a reprising role, but I suppose having too many past characters return would hamper the story.... I'm really wondering how Snake's gonna take the EVA down, because it's around five times the size of a Metal Gear, 20 times the armor resiliency, and 60+ times the strength. Plus it also has an AT Field and a progressive knife, making it all the more dangerous. Snake's grenade launcher can't shoot all that far either. Do continue~ this fic has lots of promise in it, and would be great to see finished! |