*is brought back to life again* *reads 'Sick'* O.O *reads 'Nail Polish'*
Branch One: *sighs and shakes head*
Branch Two: O.O
Branch Three: *mouth gapes open* *looks remarkably like a fish* *recovers* *cheers* Go Shippo!! ^__^

O.o! Those were hilalarious! Can you write more? I can supply you with all the pocky you can handle if you but write more! Do you want chocolate or strawberry? Or do you like the mushroom shaped ones?

"It seems to have removed your demon half"
That was so good!

That was very good. I read Rain, and this was just a great ending to it.

Hi! This was hilarious. I know im supposed too write bad stuff about it, but I'm not much of a writer myself, so I can't help you there. Ha! That means I can only compliment! Anyway, write more soon! * kneels on ground, begging * please? :)

stupid. corny. odd. but FUNNY!!!! no more on this? *pouts* i liked it in all its oddness...
=^.^=

Really great story... but one problem
600¥ (YEN) is like 50 cents, take or give, in America.... Its not expensive.... It's still good overall

LOL!

I laughed, I cried, I drank Mt. Dew. I still prefer the second timeline. Oh well. I suspect that had this ep appeared in the manga, the first time line would have been what happened. The third was good too, though. Shippou and his friends. Oh, right, I'm supposed to be saying helpful review stuff. Umm, nope, drawing a blank.

*eyes her fingernail polish suspiciously* Great job with Shippou's one-liner finishing touches!

Dirty little fox! He planned it, didn't he?

I think it's safe to say that the Shikon Shard Expedition is now brutally brought to a halt for the next nine months and five years. Time for a group vaction in Kagome's home -- all the benefits of modern medicine, and no attacking monsters.

heehee! This is good! And I loved "Rain" btw - now that was a nice lemon. ^_~

PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAP.email me once anthor chap is up.

hahahaahaha lololololol

but didn;t you say it was a SERIES? where's the resT?

^_____^ Ahhh! A sequeeeelish thing! XD Go Shippou!!